A little better punctuation would help. However besides that the story was nice and you showed a talent for grammer.

Sorry about all the problems, but this is fanfiction's answer to unnecessary ungrades that have been plaguing my stories for a while now. I'll try and post a new version.

Quotation marks would help.

Hey, I got something for you from the store. It's called punctuation. "',.:;
Now that the snide is out of the way, the fic wasn't bad. A cute little one shot is always alright. Just remember quotation marks and apostrophes next time.

Um... You forgot the word commas, and it was very hard to read because of that.

Good work. I really enjoyed it. And isn't Ranma cruel. A whole pitcher. Hehe,...

cute... i like the humor of it all.