Very interesting fic--kept my attention throughout. Nice depiction of emotions.

Nicely done! Looking forward to reading more of your writing. CE ,:-]

This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read, not even joking. Keep up the fantastic work!

This is awesome. It seriously is. Petey is very cute :)

I love what you did with the 'yellow' thing aswell.

I don't know where to begin. That was the BEST Fringe fanfic I've ever read. You brilliantly interwove all of the tips and plot elements into this story. Everything seemed to tie together so nicely! (the yellow: bad medicine was clever!) I'll be damned if you've hit the nail on the head when we get the whole backstory of Olive and Petey. Thank God for writers like you!
Please tell me you're going to continue this?

i love your story XD ! ...bolivia all the way ! woo hoo!

Aww I really like this, it's so cute yet so angsty. You're a great writer, keep it up!!

I knew it, walter met olivia before he even MET her (if that makes any sence) Cool!

I KNOW wasn't this past episode so great!? ah, the ending had me FREAKING OUT! i was like "WALTER, NO! WHAT!?!?!" aw i love peter and olivia! aw. and i love how you explain how walter just KNEW to have peter calm her down.

VERY WELL WRITTEN! thanks! :D

A very interesting, bittersweet backstory you created there.