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Lily
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
I like this story ^^ !
thanks
pennypigeon
2009-05-17 . chapter 3
Aww, poor Mai! love it loads!
KagomeMiroku
2009-05-16 . chapter 3
I should really keep a look at updations, huh? I didn't know you edited and stuff! I need to be aware of things more, and stop spending so much time on dA rather than check around! Like to FF or course!

Anyways! I absolutly, positively, love this story! I mean, it's just great in every way! Like, like...YEAH! I mean, I loved it the first time around, even though the first time I hadn't much time to comment, considering being rushed off the computer, but now I have all the time!

You grasp both halves of Polarshipping so well. I can see it all just playing before me how detailed and spot on everything is, like it's too perfect. I can see it all, and it's just amazing how you get both Mai and Jou down perfectly! Well of course you would I mean, it's Polarshipping! And not quite anyone knows Polar like you ^.~

Well anyway, before I don't know how to shut up: I loved this story, and it was even better all fixed up!

Keep up the good work~!
r0gue lebeau
2009-05-14 . chapter 3
Great Mai/Jou moments and loved the ending...it rocks!
Red Archery Girl
2009-05-14 . chapter 3
Love the story!! Sorry I didn't review the previous chappies, I was in a rush, though that's not really much of an excuse. I like it that you wrote it by the manga rather than the anime; it makes a nice change, though I have to say, I'm with the anime all the way. You're right, it is really weird that we both included a part about the handkerchief without seeing it in eachother's fic, hm... anyway, like I said; really great story. Hope there's more.
Menchi
2009-05-13 . chapter 3
Aww, I really loved this chapter...the part where Jounouchi handed Mai a handkerchief was so adorable! ^^
Maybe she will be able to recover after all, now that the pair have finally admitted their feelings towards each other.
*salutes* Thanks!
Journey Maker
2009-05-12 . chapter 3
Well it's a start, now maybe they can move on and try again.. I've loved reading this story...
Journey Maker
2009-05-12 . chapter 2
Mai needs to stay clear of Malik. I hope that nothing bad happens and that Jou opens up to her. Must read on..
Journey Maker
2009-05-12 . chapter 1
I love this story. I wish that Jou would tell Mai how he really feels.. Must read on.
arashi wolf princess
2009-05-12 . chapter 3
The ending is perfect for the story. About time they admitted their feelings. Excellente.
arashi wolf princess
2009-05-12 . chapter 2
Hope Joey will manage to help Mai out. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Velgamidragon
2009-05-12 . chapter 3
That was very beautiful, a job well done. Excellente!
r0gue lebeau
2009-05-12 . chapter 2
Whew! Awesome chapter! I love the thought of seeing how Mai and Jou actually 'see' each other. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Menchi
2009-05-11 . chapter 2
Thanks for the update! The effects on Mai from Kaiba's new invention certainly surprised me! I wonder what Jounouchi will do when he catches up to her...
I can't wait to read the next chapter *grins sheepishly* but please, don't think you have to rush!
Toodles! ^^
Velgamidragon
2009-05-11 . chapter 2
Oh nice polarshipping. I have only read bits and pieces of manga that I've found on the internet but I did see (part) of the duel between Malik and Mai. [horrified] It was freaky and scary. You portray their characters very well.
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