great fic. update soon ^_^ Ja.

i know, i0m late with this review. sorry^^

this chapter is, well...WOW! is a great way to describe it^^
i can't find other words...it's simply fantastic!
and Cross is Lavi's dad!! too cool!! i always see them like father and son XD

i'm so happy you've udated this. i couldn't decide if i like this to no end or if it didn't like it, but after this chapter i can say that...I LOVE THIS!^^

okay, I'll review. ^_^
I've never seen any of the Oceans, but I think I'd like to read your 'interpetation' a little bit more discription to some of the things you hinted at, like why Cross got put away, and why or how they are going to rob the place? Maybe why 'Innocent Allen' in involved?
cool though XD
keep writing!
LB

Im liking where this is going ;D For some reason I can't help but read these kind of stories. I cant help but feel sorry for Tyki having to watch Lavi but hey he got a free show xDD Ive never seen Oceans Eleven (was it twelve?) but from this I think I now have a rough idea what its about. I hope to read more in the future :D

-too lazy to sign in-

what time do you have school? youre lucky if its 8. I`m at the building at 6:50 -dies-

can`t wait for an update!

i squealed when i saw this alert in my email. seriously, i thought you had dropped this and was all sad about it. not trying to be pushy considering i know how much life can suck, but you might want to drop us all a line or something next time :] any doodle, great chapter. i had originally thought that this was all gonna be smut (yay) but now it has plot and that's just even better(an original plot at that, good job). i can't wait to see how you planned everything out, so update soon please?

oh, and Cross as lavi's dad just cracks me up. they're so loving.
other things that just made my day: the story of daisya and kanda xD, tyki getting all hot and bothered while watching lavi, er, work (but who seriously wouldn't?), Rhode trying to convince tyki to let her come in (lol fangirls are everywhere), and the mention of the laundry shoots as well as sending allen down them.

AND you get major kudos for making them all criminals (you just made lenalee a thousand times cooler in my head) and turning timcampy into a cat.

lmao, i <3 your story. you so need to update it.

The dialog and characters' voices are amazing. You do a really good job with it. Do you have original stories? I'd be thrilled to read them...

Ah!
So actually he was working as a hooker with a motive!
Tsk...
He's soo going to get Tyki! :D

Update soon! ^^

-lala
la.la.la~

I caught on to the Ocean's referencing. I love all three of those movies. Anyway, I'm happy to see an update and to see some interesting plot development going on.

IU17

Nice work dedicating yourself! :D And I thinkk.. this chapter confused me a little, but I'll hold back my questions and wait for more to come out. xD
This is another wonderful chapter! Haha, I really should watch Ocean's Eleven.. Hrm.
Can't wait for more~

Somehow I missed when this fic was first posted back in April, but I can tell you, you *so* have my attention now. :D Very hot chapter. Looking forward to more. :)

I am so in love with this story! You have to update soon, it's killing me! Can't wait for Lucky!

I !LOVE! this story... UPDATE! PLEASE! I still have sleepless nights ahead of me!

ehehehehehe! Tyki watches Lavi do it with other people? *evil laughter* genius! Hehe, then would Tyki be all hot and bothered by his...'preforamnces'? lol!

...i want to know...what happens...

there isn't anything really happening yet and i'm already wound up in squealing like a fangirl. lavi's rules are just priceless and i could totally see him having guidelines for something like that if this situation were real (if the bookman and exorcist thing falls out, it seems that he would have a fine time in this occupation ^_^)


update soon! seriously.