next time you should zap him into a toilet brush and clean the toilet with him mwahahahahahaha

Ok I loved this story and really all of ur stories that I've read but I have one question on this fic. Is Mirai future Trunks or kid Trunks? And pls come back to .

I almost laughed out loud about Goku leaving little Goten all by himself at home! Sometimes Goku is a little too absentminded.

I am giggling as I write this, but initially I felt so bad at the torture Goku and Bura were putting Vegeta through. Nothing that he's done to Kakarrot is as humiliating as what he put him through in this fic, nor did it make them go as crazy. You've taken Vegeta torture to a whole 'nother level. Nice work! Disturbing, but nice. Great stuff!

Vegeta:(staring at the story
Ryoko:(on the ground laughing) Holy cow! Chu, that is one of the funniest stories I read!

Vegeta:(turning a sickily green color(looks at Ryoko) What are you laughing at?

Ryoko:(pointing at Vegeta(still laughing) You!
Vegeta: This story's creepy.

Ryoko:(sitting back on her bed) Yeah, it was kinda creepy. The "yes,I'm fine dandy, Kakarot" part spooked me out!

Vegeta:(grins(laughs hysically
Ryoko:(looks at Vegeta raises an eyebrow) Veggie? are you all right?

Vegeta:(in a crazed voice) yes, I'm just fine dandy Ryoko.

Ryoko:(freaked out) Cut it out! You're freaking me out!

Vegeta:(laughs) Gotcha!

Ryoko:(glares then gets an idea(gets off the bed and walks over to Vegeta. grabs himm gives him a big bear hug
Ryoko: My poor, crazed Veggie! (snuggles him
Vegeta: Let me go!
Ryoko: Okey Dokey!(drops Vegeta sits back on her bed
Vegeta:(grumbles
Ryoko: Great Fic, Chu!

Vegeta:Yeah, right. (gets a pillow thrown at him
Ryoko: Shut up Veggiehead!

hahahaa, funni story! aww poor Mirai! but he saved the day *of course* .

RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO HUMILIATE MIRAI! GOKU AND VEGETA IS BAD ENOUGH BUT POOR MIRAI? I KNOW YOU HAVE WRITTEN FICS AFTER THIS BUT I DEMAND YOU WRITE A STORY HUMILIATING BURA! DO IT NOW! I WANT TO SEE THE BRAT HUMILIATED BY MIRAI, THAT'S RIGHT, MIRAI. C'mon, this is a request, NOT a flame. Do it now!

*in tears* That was sooo sweeeet! Aww, poor Veggi. CHANGE ME BACK NOW! Vegeta, off the keyboard. NO! THE GREAT AND POWERFUL SAIYA-JIN NO OUJI
i MANAGED TO GET HIM OFF. tHE THING IS, HE'S JAMMED THE CAPS LOCK... oH WELL.

Vegeta is cute!

This was very funny. You're really good at humor fics. I like how you portray Veggie's and Goku's friendship.

Funny-funny! I liked it! *turns chibi* Only you were mean to poor Veggie! *looks rilly kawaii* C'n I have a Mirai dollie? Pleeeeeeeeease? And I wanna see the one about the Jinzouningen! *slobbers* Juunana-sama is so hot... *dribble*Konran-chan*

Very interesting. I love any story that has to do with changing shape, size, or gender. And about your Vegeta-Onna idea, you could easily put it as a fic. It would be like Ranma 1/2 (An anime about a boy who turns into a girl w/ cold water and back w/ warm)

Hmm, I didn't know someone else already wrote a fic like that. But that's oh-kay since I decided to go with Fic A anyways. I know my fic's OOC but I like it that way. As for Bura and the whole feelings things, I wasn't really paying attention to that when I was writing it. WAS she more worried about Goku than Veggie? I have no clue. I'm gonna go check out part 3 of my fic re-read that part. Oh well. I have fun writing my fics, that's all that really matters.

I agree with the person is WAAAAAAAYYY too OOC for any sort of fic. Why does Bra care more about Goku than her own father? Plus, YOU TORTURED POOR MIRA-TRUNKS-SAMA! YOU WILL PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYY! Also, I think there's already a fic starring the androids in a fic like that. It's by Eevee loves Juunanagou, and that fic kicks ass!

Whatta cute ending! Poor Mirai, ending up in Bura's room like that! I can't wait to read your Uncle ficcy! Keep up da good work! Lata!

I thought it was pretty stupid how Bra didn't care when Vegeta was crying, but she got really pissed off when Goku did. She cares about Goku's feelings more her own father's?Riiiiiiight...whatever you say. Major out of characterness on..well everyone's part. There's two kinds of "humor" fics. Funny ones and incredably stupid ones like this. :P