Awesome story! I love the Egoist pairing, and you wrote this beautifully!

Cheers,
Fangirl66

kawaii! i like hiro-san^^

Surely that was hot...
I loved the dialogue of Hiroki complaining about Nowaki's erotic manners with the spoon.
Hiroki is really cute, I agree with super-sexy Nowaki.

mmhm icecream...
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You had sex with that spoon! ... -snickers- my favorite line

He... Hiroki... is jealous of a spoon...
*rolls around on the floor laughing hysterically*

Ok, i really REALLY loved this fic. I absolutely adore your characterisation of Hiroki... the way he's equal parts exasperated and so in love with Nowaki.

Your language and descriptions were very vivid and tangible, a pleasure to sink into.

Hiroki's bouncing between having fuzzylusty feelings, being jealous, and disgusted with the icecream was great.

I've sadly run out of words to tell you how awesome this fic is. Without a doubt, I am favouriting it. You've done a great job capturing them so well.

Those eyes, and the combination of gentleness and power
tht's like one of the reasons i love hiroki.gosh, this couple is soo cute!!i lvoe this fic!!short n sweet!!i love it when hiroki is the one losing control, since it means more, after all he is very conservative.
awesome fic.

this is so funny. I wish i can really watch Nowaki practically having sex with a spoon. I loved the description with Hiro watching him with his head back and his adams apple bobbing. so Kawaii

Aw,I loved this fic.

aw (: i really like this. well written! x