Good so far. Very much so. Hope you update soon. Can't wait for more. :)

A short chappie is better than no chappie! Just enough to whet my appetite. *yum*

This chapter leaves me with so many questions swirling in my head! Maybe some will be answered in the next chapter? *hint,hint*

Oh my goodness! Yet another chapter wonderfully done, and you still have the suspense! Who's the men that have taken dear Edmund? Oh, I can't wait to read it! It's all so mysterious, really, and you've written it perfectly like that. I hope you update soon, and don't quit!

Keep it up, your still doing awesome! (I believe you always will)

A reader,

Alwayslove

I'm going to review every chapter so that means review spamming and they might delete me but a story of this worth deserves lots of reviews. M'dear I love it seriously. And I love the girl whose obsessing over Edmund. It sounds like all of us.

Dude I just shot hot chocolate out of my nose and it was very hot so now I'm in pain. Good job for hurting me and stop with cliff hangers or I'll start pouting like a three year old.

But I really this a ton.

Oh, the suspense!! This is such a good chapter! I'm very glad you decided to continue on with this story, for I feel I would have been dreadfully sad if you hadn't. I noticed that there isn't very many reviews on your story, and if I could, I would write you a thousand, all saying how good you are at writing. But I can't, so I will say: You are an AMAZING writer, and don't dare let anyone say otherwise. You were given the gift of writing for a reason, so use it! I can't think of any way right now that you could possibly make this story worse. It really is an incredible story!

Hoping you update soon,

A reader,

Alwaysloving

Poor Ed, if he survives this Peter is gonna kill him! Interested to see what King Lune has to do with it all.

PS - I've always thought that griffins shriek, but that's just me :)

Ah, the plot thickens! It just ain't right for them to kill a dryad, though.

I read your original version and I am enjoying the rewrite even more! The changes you have made have improved the story. It seems to flow better than the original. The pace is smooth and the characters are well written. I am looking forward to what happens next...update soon!

I'm very interested to see how the italicized parts fit in with the rest of the story. Part one was great, just don't make us wait too long for part two!

Love it! Here's one thing you might want to fix though: '...drenched bird falcon pirching'.

You don't really need to say 'bird' and 'falcon', since falcons are birds. It's a bit redundant. And 'pirching' should be 'perching'.

The plot is great!

I read this story when it was up before, and I have to say I like this version better. However, I am a little confused about the prologue...does it take place later or before this?

Darn, when *will* you spill the beans?! I must say, you choose just the right cut-off points for your cliffhangers. Keep updating!

No cliffhangers allowed! (just kidding!) This is a very interesting tale, can't wait to see what happens next.