it's ok make more plz

Great chapter so far though it was disappointed that the bad guy was not caught. Kudos to you that you make a good Danzo and that he is helping both Naruto and Sayuri to live happily. Danzo reminds me of Lex luthor and that he wanted to defeat his rival but death had taken his pride (I meaning danzo though the same can be use for superman) of finally getting the satisfaction of winning against hiruzen. So it seems that danzo will have to make amends by helping the last namikaze and uchiha in a way that would make hiruzen proud of his old rival though he never hated danzo at all. Though I would like to see what happens to orochimaru but probably he and kabuto died together as a gay couple. Now as a suggestion for a chapter and unless you're going to use it for the marriage part is when both naruto and sayuri gets advice from their peers. So imagine naruto with danzo, jiraiya, kakashi, iruka and tenuchi talking to the young boy about being a better person and that sort of friendly male advice. Now for sayuri, I'd go with tsunade, shizune, anko, ayane and yuugao to teach sayuri girl advice. One thing I see is that sayuri will eventually becomes tsunade's new apprentice probably before or after sakura is killed, defected, etc. I think also that the akatsuki is already defeated since they needed the jinchurikis's powers as untamed and since naruto has shut up kyuubi, that plan is dead. Also that madara will now die since he needed another male to live and since sayuri is feamle, he's toast and therefore the akatsuki's purpose is destroyed.

Cool but way to short also hope to see a lemon

great chapter

keep updating...

Switch the r and the k around it's Iruka not Ikura.

wtf is wrong with iruka?

Not bad but a little weird and you spelled Iruka wrong but I hope for a longer chapter next time

con plz

Good story so far. I think that Sakura is behind controlling Iruka with a genjutsu. She still thinks that Naruto is controlling Sayuri and making him a girl since he is gay and wants to rape her precious Sasuke. Sorry for saying naruto is gay but it's quite difficult because I am saying what Sakura is on her evil mind. I like how danzo is the good guy though he may want Sayuri to have children but at least he is compassionate and smarter as opposed to the manga danzo for which i hate him.

Wow, that was...random.

what's wrong with Iruka and you do know Naruto could've knocked him out cold right?

umm no offence... but.. you do know that Naruto has just finished training with one of the Sannin he could have just easily knocked out Iruka and brought him to the Hokage and Sayuri's Sharingan could have predicted Iruka's attacked and counter she did her own three hard years of training both should easily knocked out Iruka without any effort and brought him to Tsunade.

this is not a flame I'm just stating some facts

but anyway for the sake of the story let's see where this goes.

Excellent Sakura Bashing and great story so far I can't wait to see what happens next

I want to know more that happens and I love your story's so much. I think you did a great job as the Author of this story with the plot and everything. Please make more Chapter's soon :D :D

~Violet