aww, i loved the tony chapter :)

I like your version of events so much better! I couldn't stand that they made Tony a bad guy in the last season!

I liked the Jack/Audrey and Bill/Karen parts quite a bit. They painted a nice picture for what could have happened afterwards (had things not turned out differently, of course).

The Tony/Renee part I found a bit odd considering even before we found out he was still hung up on Michelle, he and Renee didn't bond in the slightest, let alone share any kind of sexual tension. The fact that they'd clearly been pointing her in the direction of Jack since the very beginning of the season was something I might have been able to overlook, but the complete lack of chemistry between her and Tony over the course of the entire season makes it impossible for me to imagine this kind of scenario.

The other two parts were very enjoyable, though.

great start to the story!

That was absolutely excellant as usual, I loved all three chapters. You're one of my favourite fanfic writers, I was so excited when I noticed you had written another one! So much better than the endings the show gave us,so I think I'll choose to remember your way instead.

Any chance of a follow up? I would love to see more of their relationships and the business Tony was going to propose to them all.

aw, I love B/K :)

This was a great final chapter, and I loved reading it. I liked your explanation that the CTU loft was Karen's old apartment, and Bill and Karen pretending not to be married at the hotel was hilarious. I really like how you write them. Thanks for sharing this story- I really enjoyed these happy endings after all the gut-wrenching twists this season. Hope to read more soon :-)

Just read the second and third chapters. I really enjoyed the third chapter it sounded like Bill and Karen. It made my giggle and feel sad for them. Nice story.

This is a great chapter. I've always liked Karen as a character, and was disappointed that the writers never brought her back this season... especially given that they took the trouble to have Bill wear his wedding ring.

Bill and Karen, and their marriage troubles, really come to life in your hands. I think that Isabelle's 360 degree change in reaction to Bill's return was a little abrupt. But I did like how Isabelle and Karen interacted, especially Karen's phone call to let her know not to wait up.

I also thought that the whole "affair" scene at the hotel check-in was a bit cheesy; I'm not sure joking about gun-related violence is a good idea in the US... someone is likely to take you seriously and call the cops. But I was pleased that Bill and Karen found their happily ever after.

Natalie

amazing : ) loved it! I really enjoyed the three chaps. my fave couple is def Bill & Karen but i also really love audrey & jack and well...tony isnt so bad either ;-) thought i dont know who renee is ^^
anyways, amazing story. i dont read a lot of 24-stories but urs was def worth it!

hope to read more of you (maybe a little bit more karen& Bill? there are only so many "happy" stories about them...)

Jen

Just found this story and I love it so far! I have pretty much given up hope that we will ever see Audrey again and am trying to accept the idea of Jack and Renee together, but I don't like that idea and I love the way this one ends...probably better than I will like the real ending for the season. The one criticism I have is I don't think Heller would want to have Jack killed...he is just trying to protect his daughter, but I don't think he'd want to do that to her or to Jack. I think that if Audrey were conscious and able to articulate for herself and insisted that she wanted to be with Jack Heller would have no choice but to accept it and would then be trying to make sure Jack never went back into the field again.

I'm going to read the rest of this later, but I'm really excited about it. This seems to do everything I wanted to happen that won't at the end of the season: Jack and Audrey back together, and it looks like you are not going to make Tony a bad guy, which I am still really upset about (it's why I haven't updated any of my stories in weeks). Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for him.

I've just read the last part,the one I was waiting for more impatiently and I totally love it! I love the way you've described them because they are both in character and I could easily see them reacting in that way to the events of that day and the previous months. Their interaction was great both in the sad parts and in the more cheerful ones,moreover their talk was just heartbreaking! Poor Karen! I could really feel for her,but at the same time I was sorry for Bill because it was very clear that he still loved her and that the only thought of Karen wanting to end their marriage would have destroyed him. They're just so very stubborn,but that's also why they're perfect for each other. Really great chapter, not only for the psychology of the characters. I really like your descriptive style. It always helps s background while reading and I find details very important. Really great story!

I LOVE IT! As a BK shipper this was my favourite part, and let me tell you: you did not disappoint! It was wonderful. Haha, I loved the part where they pretended to be having an affair! Fantastic story, thank you so much for making a return. I absolutely loved it!

...I'm going to go read it again!

very good story and thank you for writing it. i personnaly would have like to have seen jack and renee get together but of course i like the two of them but thank you for a very good read. thanks and take care, anne

GREAT CHAPTERS! PLEASE POST MORE SOON!