Edward in a fedora? I adore it. I'm swooning from here.

Love it.

i have loved your story. please update soon and keep writing.

Even though it was a bit filler-ish I liked the chapter because I like seeing Carlisle. Can't wait for the Christmas party!

Jasper and Alice are so cute!

I really like your version of Alice. So many times she is written over-the-top and then becomes annoying and pushy. Yours is a good balance. Strong, with lots of gumption. She takes care of those around her...not pulling them around like they're her personal play things during an acid trip! Smile

Another great chapter...thanks!

That was a sweet chapter darlings! It's okay for things to end, as long as they are happy endings! Or endings with a lesson I suppose. Thank you for writing!

You don't bet against Alice! :)

Thank you so much for replying back. I wonder why no one thought of Rosalie? Can't wait for the Christmas party, sounds exciting.

alice cracks me up! i love how she's already planning triple dates for them! it's good to see everyone is safe and in good health too! great chapter, thanks so much for the update!

So sad this is ending. I've loved in so much. Maybe you guys could look into do another story with a different plot line, but the same language?

I just adore you girls. I'll definitely be recommending this story with my next update. If I ever get to update.

I'm sad to see this story go, but I completely love each and every word of it.

Thank you for writing such a realistic noir piece. It's been wonderful.

This is such a sweet story - I love the ols fashioned morals and manners.

I love how Alice knows how to keep Jasper on her toes in such subtle (well, they're subtle to me) ways. I'd never would have thought of saying something like that to get that kind of reaction. It was nice to see a bit of Rose here too. I'm going to be sad to see this story end! I love this time period!

Thanks for the update!

I love your Alice- she has her hands on so many things in the best of ways.

I just love Alice. And I'm so glad Jasper told her about the situation in the warehouse. Alice needed to understand and accept the dangers of Jasper's occupation.

I love Alice in this story.

I'm sad that the story is almost over. *pouts*

I AM SO SAD THAT THIS STORY IS COMING TO AN END. I HOPE THAT YOU GUYS GO OUT WITH A BANG WHEN THIS ENDS. I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. ALICE MADE ME LAUGH. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!