 dreamingofmagic 2009-11-28 . chapter 10I really love this story a lot. I would write more but unfortunately it is 2:37 am, not kidding at all and I am tired so... ya. Cant wait for the next chapter though! ;-D |
 Twilight.Owns 2009-11-27 . chapter 10Awesome. =) |
 Azura Soul Reaver 2009-11-26 . chapter 10That was great! |
 Valinor's Twilight 2009-11-26 . chapter 10Great update I enjoyed it. Though, I recommend not following the show all the way through that will get boring. Make up your own story. I always say if people wanted a blow by blow of the show or manga they'd pop in a dvd or pick of amanga. |
 Ebony Dagger 2009-11-26 . chapter 10wow, this story is so good and i'm really glad you've updated :)
i love how Kaede seems really quite dumb but is really smart naturally
please update son because i'm dying to know how she reacts to Kakashi's replacement jutsu :) |
 xx Kitty-girl xx 2009-11-26 . chapter 10O...M...F...G! That was awesome! The way you described the fighting scene it was all so perfect that I could actually imagine it! Seriously awesome!
And Idk why but during all of Kaedes dialogs I just couldn't help but laugh so hard and then pass out from the lack of oxygen! You sure have a good sense of humour! Hahahahahaha...
I blow you a kiss! |
 livstar235 2009-11-07 . chapter 9love the story, especially with Kaede teasing Sasuke! Keep up the work! :) |
 iceyxrain00 2009-10-31 . chapter 9I love your story!It's so cute!The plot is great,the character are mostly in character(lol),and it's just GREAT!I really really hope that you continue it.I also suggest maybe a love triangle maybe.Please do update.^^
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Also,if you have the time,pleaae read my Shugo Chara Doki;Kuukai Soma Story: Mai Tsurai no Nagori,Agriato.(Thank you,in case if you didn't know that)^^' |
 Ebony Dagger 2009-10-30 . chapter 9please please update soon
i'm still lovign this story and it must continue! |
 ehrgiez 2009-10-27 . chapter 9 well i love kaeda charcter she is quit lovely anyway plz update as soon as you can *_* |
 Valinor's Twilight 2009-10-27 . chapter 9Wonderful update. I loved how Kaede messed with Sasuke's head. Can't wait to read more! |
 Azura Soul Reaver 2009-10-27 . chapter 9That was great! |
 xx Kitty-girl xx 2009-10-27 . chapter 9Hmpf... Well... *clasps hands together* how should I put this... The chapter was... It was... Positively... No, no, no, I mean ABSOLUTELY MARVELLOUS! I loved it ^-^ I simply addore the way you make fun of Mr. Personality a.k.a. Sas-gay! I think I cracked a rib laughing, seriously!
I do hope you up-date more often, cause I can't wait to see more!
I blow you a kiss! And F.Y.I. if the kisses bother you that much well tought! Suck it up Lerryn and take it like the big lovingly-crazy-who-writes-her-name-on-her-hand girl!
I blow you another kiss just to ** you off! Mwahahahahahaha! |
 Ebony Dagger 2009-09-05 . chapter 8please pease update because this is just hilarious, i mean kaede arrives 6 hours late and is still early
very amusing |
 Valinor's Twilight 2009-09-03 . chapter 8I think you should skip the IrukaHokage scene altogether. Seems kind of irrelevant with Kaede added into the story. Sakura is gettin' jealous. Girls always attack other girls about their looks with unfair and untrue comments to make themselves feel better. I highly doubt Kaede is ugly. She's probably the type that when she hits 16 is better looking than all the rest of them. Also, I hope you make Kaede stronger than all the other female shinobi (minus Temari and Anko). Even Sakura is weaker than the guys in Shippuden. Kishimoto is a total sexist. When the girls actually do fight they get knocked out from attacks the guys would pull themselves away from. Oh, and almost all of them are glorified nurses a stereotypical female role.
Maybe Anko could be her sensei when Sasuke leaves the village! They would get along really well. |