The story is good, but, with all due respect, you aren't exactly a very good writer. Also, some ideas, like Atta kissing Flik and him coming back to live are obviously taken from other movies. The raw plot, however, is somewhat impressive - for a Fanfiction

Happy ending...YA FLIK!

Lol. Sleeping Beauty

I quite agree LOL

Not sure where this is going, but it has potential!

is very freaky and cool