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Toxic Hathor
2009-04-28 . chapter 1
T.T

Shacha is so cool. I read this long ago, but had studies for the mocks piled on top of my head...and PMS-ing :D but now it's okay. Finished the mocks...got over the bitchiness and now I'm cool ::grins stupidly and offers Tuzki Chan to Piika so he could give her company!::

You were right...this was short and cute...especially the little part with Yugi and Teya talking... ::giggles:: I was laughing at Yugi's reaction to Teya's: "I slept with Kaiba last night" The part with the soul-mountain also had me laughing my head off...

I didn't know that a Yuri fic can be so beautiful...Teya's reaction and jealousy when Kisara said she doesn't like being so far from Seto... it's very pretty... I am stupid..and haven't read Random Access yet (yeah, VERY stupid) but I think tomorrow I'll be able to read it...

The reference to Yami, as you already know, had me fangirling like there's no tomorrow. ::super dreamy:: I am really looking forward to the two parts to come next...

My review is not rambly today T.T me missing Shacha...who usually lurks and doesn't come online...::.pokes!::

Put up the new one-shot when you can ::hugs::

Hathor...
Darleneartist
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
HI Shadow over Egypt,
I like this one. it goes well with the others. I feel this one is even more beautiful though.
I like how you discribed Seto's heart. And Kasera being in it guarding the light and Atemu who we know is the treasure.
I liked the discriptions. They were beautiful and so well written. I also like the part of her sharing with Yugi that she slept with Seto. I laughed and cried for her because she wanted to be with Kasera and not Seto.
And Seto wants to be with Atemu and not Anzu.
A really differcult spot that you have the two of them in. I hope Ishizu will be able to solve the situation.
I don't like four ways myself. I am wondering how Seto will bring Atemu back. I did have a hint from the last one shot and I enjoyed it too.
Keep them coming love,Darlene.
dragonlady222
2009-04-24 . chapter 1
GOod story. I hope Ishizu can help her and Seto.
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