|Reviews for The Christmas Welcome Home|
| Guest 1/28/13 . chapter 1
Wow...who knew it could get that ugly?...lol As whitewashed as it may have been, I would have to say I prefer to stick to the original peaceful loving ways of this family.
| wandamarie 5/3/12 . chapter 7
wow please up date when you can thanks
| wandamarie 5/3/12 . chapter 6
great work thanks
| wandamarie 5/3/12 . chapter 5
thanks keep up the great work
| wandamarie 5/3/12 . chapter 4
it is a good one thanks
| wandamarie 5/3/12 . chapter 3
| wandamarie 5/3/12 . chapter 2
oh no all h3ll is going to brake lose Paul is not going to be able to stand after all the men in the family get done with him
| wandamarie 5/3/12 . chapter 1
wow great work thanks
| Dimples73 4/4/12 . chapter 7
| Galaxy-Defending-Hopeful 6/21/11 . chapter 1
This is a really cute, nice story. I really like it :D
| clare wiseman 3/14/11 . chapter 6
were is the rest of the story
| Miss-Independent146 7/29/10 . chapter 6
i reallly loved it!
please update soon - have to find out what happens next (:
| andiej 9/5/09 . chapter 1
I REALLY miss this story. I think its awesome. Please update soon.
| KeDe 8/23/09 . chapter 1
I'm pleased that someone is doing Waltons fanfics. This was such a wonderful show with lots of great characters that have so many stories left to tell.
Your story does not depict a normal Walton's Christmas. I see the love the family members have for each other but where's the happiness?
There are some technical issues I have with your story: it reads more like a play where the characters come onstage when their name is mentioned; you change from past tense to present tense; the dialogue sounds stilted. People talk in contractions: I'm, not I am; they're, not they are, etc.
Also, I understand there is great difficulty when dealing with so many characters, but I feel there was just too much standing around, especially after he hit Erin.
All that being said, I did Henry enjoy it so I hope you will see your way to finishing it.
| Myrle 16 5/22/09 . chapter 2
i thought ure summary said it was a normal walton christmas!
i love it! its a great story. sad, but good