   SakuraNightStar 1/2/04 . chapter 1Aww! Cute Cute cute! Dreams about sheep! . Keep writing! |
| ashley-chan 9/12/02 . chapter 1 kawaii..._ luved it |
| AliLamba 8/4/02 . chapter 1 WAAAAAAAAII! that was so cute o.o |
| Raven 2/3/02 . chapter 1 That was cute and funny ard combo to make work good job!_ |
| The critic 1/9/02 . chapter 1 i find this a nice story al tho im being nicer then i should i like it and i give it 2 stars out of five |
| SoLeo 12/27/01 . chapter 1 That was so KAWAII!
it was just too cute!
it was very like Lime...poor Otaru's stomach.
Xelloss reaction...
getting knocked o...ZZZZZZZZ |
| Lime fan 12/24/01 . chapter 1 Very CUTE! |
| LinaNverse 12/21/01 . chapter 1 too cute! this was so sweet. what a great idea! talk about original! lol. i liked it. it was written well, too. i couldn't find any real mistakes...) |
| pianocelloconducting 12/18/01 . chapter 1 Cute and suitably heart-tugging. I'm glad everyone's in character. |
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