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Reviews for: The Mesopotamia's Story
rick777 4/25/02 . chapter 1
I liked your fic! Was interesting. But... i still didn't like it even when you give us Messie's point of view, she talks as if she was evil and unforgiving. She should be feeling lonely, and missing her new friends. Oh well. That's my opinion.

But it was very good. You're one of the very few people that treat Messie (i like calling her that way) as a person, and not as an "Evil monster" or "machine went berzerk".

Congratulations!
Aoi's Neko-o 12/25/01 . chapter 1
Outstanding Fic... Was about to Cry... You're Excellent! i enjoyed reading it! A

Keep up the good work!
Sachiko V 12/21/01 . chapter 1
Wai! Very nice story! I'm pretty sure that's really how Mesopotamia must've felt. Great job analyzing such facts! _
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