He was so close! i really like this story! it's good, but im seeing small gramatical mistakes that can easily be avoide. i recomend rereading what you've written (i myself don't like to rereadd what i've written...it's like im afraid of what i've said or something) but believe you me, it is really beneficial to do so. )

Great job so far! It's fine, changing up the story a tad. Don't we all?

The only thing is that maybe in the first one maybe Matt and Kate seemed too stricken with each other...

But honesty don't worry, I loved it still!

Anyone who adds to Skybreaker is my uber-friend.(Nice use of the word uber, by the way, in that last review!)

So, keep updating. I want more.

Adorable! OH MATT AND KATE. This has made me realize how much I need to go back and read Airborn. :D Great job!

It's great to see something new on the skybreaker archive.

you write well, and it was interesting to read, but there is one thing i would like to say.

mattseemed a little out of character, but that's all

please update soon!