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Brenna
2009-11-01 . chapter 2
O please update soon! I completely love ur writing!
scarletrose-saphiresky
2009-10-29 . chapter 2
S-u-b-a-r-a-s-h-i-i!It's wonderful!I really like how you end the chapter with a cliffhanger, leaving the reader wanting more...
Sailor Panda
2009-10-20 . chapter 2
Enjoying this so far. Hope you update soon!
Miko-Ceres
2009-10-08 . chapter 2
GAGAGAGAGAGAGAGGAGA

Why has it been so long since you updated?? PLEASE, update. Oh my god, I'm going to cry from this cliff-hanger. Please, oh please. Ah, I'm so excited. afijwpqeuQPED

I'm spazzing. Best fic I have read in WEEKS. AMAZING. <3
Miko-Ceres
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
That was a great lemon! I usually can't stand reading lemons because they are so weird to read, lol, but yours was very well done.

Naught Zero, having such dreams. LOL

And, what the-?? Don't tell me Yuuki had a CHILD? With KANAME??

*rushes to next chapter*
yuukicross17
2009-09-30 . chapter 2
hurry up PLEASE I NEED ZEKI ALL ITS BEEN IS KANAME X YUUKI. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. ("i wonder if Himeko is zeros please be his o can DEFINATELY NOT IMAGINE KANAME WITH
YUUKI... OH GOD THATS JUST HORRIFYING ON TOP OF THAT THEIR BROTHER AND SISTER ( well not really but still ) SO PLEASE I WANT SOME ZERO AND YUUKI M... cant wait 'till the next chapter *sqeal...>.~
-yuukicross17
JackySparrow
2009-08-30 . chapter 2
OMG!
Beautiful fic!
Continue pliss!
^^
I love the way you pictured Zero's personality. Amazing!
Kagome1235
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
w...o...w This was amazing! I love the detailed and the ending was suprising!
Great job!
I look forward in reading more.
JuJukins
2009-08-20 . chapter 2
I <3 this fanfic, although I really do not want to think about Yuuki having a baby with Kaname... Zero's so cute with kids! Aargh!
Update soon, please!
YiN.yAnG.cHoOsE.
2009-07-06 . chapter 2
very cute! love the little girl! I can't wait for more updates!
Mental Angel
2009-07-04 . chapter 2
No voilence here ^_^

Your story is going great so far ^_^
miragawa00
2009-06-23 . chapter 2
YAY! thank you very much for updating! AT LAST!

BTW, i haven't read the 1st and 2nd chapters because I wanted to read it when it's comeplete SO PLEASE WRITE FASTER! LOL! Someone told me that this story is GOOD... that's why I'm waiting for it...AND, I have a request, please write faster and PLEASE don't abandon this story (THE SHADOW-InuYasha fic) 'cause i think it's really good! GOOD LUCK!

thanks!
Ikiru.Warau.Aisuru.
2009-06-22 . chapter 2
oh, please update soon! I can already feel myself becoming addicted to this!
MEEE
2009-06-22 . chapter 2
Evil. D:
cliffhanger? >(
geh. update soon!
Zero is portrayed really well in this chapter. :)
Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Ongaku Neko
2009-06-22 . chapter 2
You're evil... You know that right? lol

Wonderful new chapter! I was happy when I saw that you updated.
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