Such a perfect capture of what it must be like. My compliments.

Wow! Really awesome story. You've got great skill with description; I look forwards to reading more of your writing.

Oh, this is wonderful! Getting inside Stein's head is very difficult, but you've done a masterful job. Definitely given me some things to think about. :) This feels like it's a turning point for Stein, and I love how you've expressed that without actually saying it. Great, great fic!

That was EXCELLENT. Great pacing, great content, and very well-written XD! I really encourage (alright, BEG) you to write more of Stein/Medusa, you're VERY good at it. :D

--Wing Love ^^

Oh, I really like this. You've done a fantastic job getting inside Stein's head. And this is such a great line: "His thoughts were scrambled, crawling all over each other like so many mindless insects, writhing away from him as he tried to pin one down." Perfect.

This is just wonderful. Poor Stein. I'm really enjoying your Soul Eater and Kuroshitsuji fics as of late