ah, i love this pairing ;; their compatability is so qt, honestly. your writing style is very beautiful, by the way, and lal was just especially since she knew that colonello had feelings for her, and in the end, she chose a life with him - ;;

Awww! This was adorable and lovely, and I absolutely flat-out giggled at the idea of two Arcobalenos waging a paintball war in a Mafia-world theme park. So absolutely ridiculous that it sounds like a serious amount of fun. :D Great fic!

hey, I love colo/lal and your fic is one of the best. thanx

Finally! A happy Collonello and Lal Mirch fanfiction! Love it!

I kind of wish this HAD happened in the series; those two are such an adorable couple.

And yes, it was too cute, but I loved it. Great.

Wondeful portrayal of our characters! :)

I absolutely loved it.

Sora

Absolutely love your take on the characters!

I loved all the references to their military days too; frogmen, yay! And...

'At last, Colonnello said, "You started a war for me?" and blushed.

"Yes!" Lal Mirch snapped, crossing her arms. "You're a real Helen of Troy!"'

GENIUS!

This is so sweet. Lal and Colonello weren't OOC like some ficlets and there was actually a something of a real personality in this. A war between being a child and being an adult at the same time. Write on! :D