This chapter was okay. not too much happening, but i do hope

that you update asap~! how about itachi by the way? any way

obito and itachi can meet up?

THis chapter has a lot missing. Not too much details about how Obito got to where he was,and he is probably very confused.

Great rewrite! anyways, it is sweet how itachi and obito have such a loving relationship. I can't wait to see how this story progresses.

Oh did not know you were doing a remake lol, the first was good and so is this one, so cannot tell which is best, but structure wise think this one is much improved from the first one.

But anyways look forward to next one and seeing how it all goes.

wow, this looks like it's going to be a really good story.

i like this one as well its like your reading two different stories with a similar purpose.

this review probably doesn't help you any, sorry.

so is naruto and obito to diffent people or not and will itachi, sasuke and kashi find out anytime soon!! this is realy cool story!! i am hopeing to see more of it soon! BYE!! ^_^

*shakes head* You do realize that Naruto will get angry several times in canon? I seem to recall the incident with Mizuki when Iruka got hurt, the bridge battle in Waves, Sasuke ended up in death state, distracting Sakura. Kakashi was the only person aware of what was going on...He's bound to notice when Obito appears! The chuinin exams when Neji tried to kill Hinata and nearly suceeded, when Naurto and Shikamaru confronted Gaara in Lee's room. Sooner or later as Naruto gains loved ones, they will notice something ODD when Naruto gets angry! Shikamaru and Shino are sharp and more likely to figure everything out!

All right, well, I didn't know this was here when I reviewed Reflections, but I don't suppose it matters. Everything that I mentioned in Reflections as needing attention has improved VASTLY in Reborn, but all of them could nevertheless use some further refining. (Try not to be discouraged by that; I don't care how famous someone is for his or her writing, I believe that refining is always something that can be done.) However, the only way you're really going to achieve this is by reading others' works and studying those pieces to find out why you find them to be so good.

The alteration of the death god to the kyuubi as a guide was a very good idea and well executed—it definitely allows for more play and exploration and gives the fox a reason to be there and to involve itself in things.

The single point of contention I have regards the Sharingan's description; unless you accidentally did not give a complete explanation, three tomoe in each eye is not what constitutes the Mangekyou—that is simply considered a "mastered" Sharingan (Itachi mastered his Sharingan when he was eight, but did not acquire the Mangekyou until he killed Shisui at thirteen). It is when the three tomoe morph into a new form that they become the Mangekyou, the design and powers of which are based on the individual, as you noted.


—RN (LS)

this story is awesome! please update soon!

great story. can't wait for the next chapter. hope you update soon! ^_^

Please update!

I realized I didn't write what I was happy with. No third personality! That was where Reflections Across Time got a over complicated and a little stupid. Also, the plot is a faster. While, it kinda needs to slow down a bit, it's pace is better the former version. There is only so much exposition and detail someone can take before he or she is attempted to scream: "Get on with the PLOT!" Hopefully, the plot actually takes off in this one. Again, Good Luck writing!

The only reason i don't like the changes are because of my personal pet peeve: making the Kyuubi nice. He suppose to be a menacing powerful fox that might have been tricked and controlled by the Madara, but hates humans. The only best emotion from him to a human has been amusement and a degree of respect. Simply put, the Kyuubi is too nice. I understand gratitude, but gratitude does not extend to this, and the Kyuubi's personality doesn't have the gruffness the canon one has. Also, I don't get how Obito/Naruto could keep the Sharingan because it is after all a blood line limit passed down through the blood not the spirit. Those are really the only things I see wrong, and that really is a personal preference. As long as this doesn't affect Obito/Naruto outside like a sudden telepathic communication or communication without Obitio/Naruto in the unconscious state (I'm sorry that cliche has been overused way to much for me to like), and the characters remain in the reasonable limits own their character and character changes, I won't have anything to complain about. Otherwise, I really like this idea, and hope you can pull it off. Good Luck writing!

I really like this story compared to the original. Oh and at the end of chapter 2 you called Naruto Yuichi.

I cant wait for the next update :D