Awww... that's sooo cute! ;)

wow what a story cant wait to read on :)

very beautifully done :D:D

thats so beautiful

im almost crying

maybe it didnt help that I watched concrete angel before

you should watch it

*sniffs*

how cute. i look forward to reading the rest of the series.

aw its so sweet, you should really put all of them together

but then again it might overwhelm people because of all the chapters, and this way people will see your other work. I like this idea...

interesting start

kudos

Blade

A good start to what could be a very good story..I think you should see where they lead you.

Awesome beginning! Let's see, revenge, revenge, revenge come to mind. Harry, Draco and Sev get revenge for Harry and themselves against Dumbledumbhead and Harry's supposed friends. Heh heh heh, that'd be great to see.

Very good. Will there be a sequel?

Harry lets his so called friends know he knows. Maybe get revenge?

Take Dumbles down?