This. Good. Read. Awesome. Love. Yes. W. o. n. d. e. r. f. u. l. (How many periods can I use to show how much I enjoyed reading this, I wonder...)

I support yaoi in this fandom with all my heart~! Good job, nicely written, but two things didn't sit right with me. One: you surely put some OOC words in Ruka's mouth, I think he doesn't even know that words like 'shit' or 'fuck' exist, not to metion that he's like 10 yo. And the part where they supposedly thought about Mikan while kissing was absolutely unnecessary. Yaoi is yaoi. This kind of thing always ruins the mood.
Well, so much for my opinion.

I love it! It was so frigin cute!Will there be a sequel?

Oh my god. Thank you! This pairing is so ridiculously obvious in GA that I couldn't believe it when I couldn't find any yaoi. I love this pairing in GA, actually it's my favorite. Keep on writing~

I like yoai just fine! As long as it's no TOO raw or sexual...
At first I thought a RxN fic would be sorta... akward, but it was great, although I still perfer MxN.
No offense in any way, I still like the yoai!
Wow... That sounded disgusting on SO many levels...
Well, expect more reveiws, cause I'm gonna go check out your other stories!

Ja ne!,
Meggie-chan(RWC)

I'm a bit confused about how I forgot to leave a review last time I read this. I must be going mad. Oh well.

Anyway! Yay, Natsume/Ruka, and this was cute. ^^ And this word is the best word I've ever read: “NOACUTALLYMIKANI'MDOINGJUSTFINENOTHINGWRONGWITHMEATALLTHANKSFORASKINGTHOUGHGOTTOGO!”

Aw. The ending I loved too. :)

I'm not sure about Ruka swearing/screaming - I know, they're older and boys do swear a lot and stuff and his emotions are very strong, but it /is/ based on a cute shoujo manga and the Ruka in my mind wouldn't go beyond 'crap' (and then turning red). (Maybe it's 'cos I exaggerate traits for crack!fics.)

Apart from that, I thought the rest was wonderfully in character. Bits like Natsume's angsty angst and Mikan's gushing were amusingly great.

Random grammar-police check - the full stop in "people. so" somewhere in the fic.

So... yes. I don't know what else to say. *uselessness* Great writing, as always - I've already added it to the c2, haven't I? I think I did.

YAY XD

very cute

flame me and I'll laugh about what a close-minded prick you are.
lol that is like so cool!! and true i hate it but anyway i've never read a fic of natsume ruka yaoi pairing but i can say this was interesting... really i like it nice chap!

Yay for yaoi~! Love this pairing, you kept them all in character which was awesome

What Natsume did at the end was funny~ XD Yay for yaoi!! Poor Mikan. She doesn't know what's going on between the two boys. Ruka's girly enough though. He'll definitely be the uke! He can never overcome Natsume, the ultimate seme. :3

Great story! I loved it~ Haha, and Ruka just couldn't contain his blushy-wushy-ness~~ X3 Great work!

Well, I'm not that much of a yaoi fan but it's always nice to read something new. And besides, I'm playing around the idea of natsume and ruka together. Quite funny. Opposites really do attract. Anyway, great story.
heart,
t-c-o

AW.
Amazing ^_^
We do need more yaoi, you're right *laughs*
Welcome back =] and keep going with your amazing writing skills! =D

Bird-chan~!