 AmazonWariorPrincess 2009-10-18 . chapter 1Hey there!
I really really really enjoyed this story! It was so cute! Great work! :D
~AmazonWariorPrincess:D |
 mensura 2009-05-27 . chapter 1This is a great story! I like how cute Eddie's in this fic!!
Though,it kinda made me surpised that Ed kissed Pete before they got to Narnia the first time. He is only 10 years old when he appears in The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe you know! Well, I was never one to reject under-age slash!
Keep up the good work! God knows how bad we need Narnia slash here!
PS:I wonder, does a bruised lip hurt more then a cut one? Hmm... |
 wazham 2009-05-26 . chapter 1yay! (( sorry, im typing with one hand and cant think clearly))
nice twist on the 'just' in edmund's title |
 DarayaChan 2009-05-25 . chapter 1Well, I liked it :]
But could have been a bit longer ;]
Especially the Ending is really sweet <3~
"I don't care. I'm High King. I can do what I want." *grin* You're so right Peter X]
It was just a bit confusing when the place changed, I just got it after Ed said " Back in England.."
But maybe that isn't even that bad :] |
 Dark Knight Harkness 2009-04-26 . chapter 1This was really good. Are you happy that I reviewed now?! Lol. And I have only been up an hour.
Love Grease. XX |
 cararook 2009-04-24 . chapter 1aww, I liked it. Wish it hadn't gone so fast, but I guess it can't be helped. Thank you for posting! |
 ElvesWizardsCentaursOhmy 2009-04-24 . chapter 1Well... they were slightly ooc, but not a majorly extreme extent. Also I'm pretty sure Narnia didn't have any cinema's. But...whatever. All in all good job. Keep on writing =) |