I actually love the idea, not of the shipping, but of the relationship. :) Good job.

Really Cool!

Great pair--it would make a neat story!

i actually really really like this!! i think the pairing is really interesting and it fits well!! i wish i could see these two in a full story!!

At first i was like: 'huh? Marcus as in Marcus Volturi Marcus?' but i have to say its really rather sweet in a weird sort of way. the stream of consciousness style really fits it well. great job!

I saw this in my mail and was surprised. Anyway, I liked it! I feel so bad for Marcus, it's about time he gets to feel something for once. And now the little monster has importance in the story. xD