 mimarin 2009-10-25 . chapter 1Hee! Usually I'm irritated with stories from Tweek's POV, but I loved the sense of serenity at the beginning, how you convey Tweek's nervousness and loneliness without resorting to too many tics. Also, I giggled when Tweek told post-vomit Craig not to kiss him. I like this more sedate, assertive Tweek. :) |