oh...

you manage to get so much in so little words! really really good, really sad, emotional, powerful.

i love it.

Amazing.

Beautiful :)

I loved the lines 'And I will try my damned hardest to make me and Sephy work. I won’t let history repeat, Lynny, I promise you that.' Really great.

hunny

is it your intention to make me cry every single time you write a noughts and crosses story? because if it is, then you succeed.

That was amazing! ah i love it

ps. yes yes i am writing it ok- i just wanna make sure it's perfect ok?

luv Larly xx

Beautiful.

Again with the :( :(

This was really good too.

Damn you and your story greatness!