Amazing story! I love the layout and plot line! You've done a spectacular job of portraying Madara and Izuna's relationship and distinctive personalities. I am truly jealous. The figure you gave them as a father is also rather intriguing. The quote he keeps repeating is very fitting! It's also a very broad fanfic, or at least it feels that way. The way you've brought in all the clans and thrown in several conflicts at once is absolutely profound. Love it, love it, love it! You must tell me when you put the next chapter out. ;)

~Uchiha Izuna

This is an awesome story.When i read it,it reminds me of the movie 300. I hope you update the next chapter soon.

Hi lovely.

Wow, Madara's actually getting laid? And a Haruno, too. Hmm, it's like... historic SasuSaku!

Dude, I'm listening to Headstrong by Trapt... It's so freakin' perfect.

O_O That was KAKUZU?! WTF?!?!?! Inohana... And the Yamanaka clan continues to produce skanks... BAHAHAHA. MADARA FAILS.

BAHAHAHAHA. IZUNA, I LOVE YOU.

Stupid one-armed bastard. *death glares Toya into the ground* IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT. I BLAME YOU. But I also blame the Mad Hatter, 'cause he's nuts.

You know how much I love Hashirama. He just makes me so happy. Heart.

Yay! Kakuzu! I like your idea for his jutsu.
About the taijutsu thing, I reckon Gai or Lee would give it a pretty good go if they ever lost an arm...
About Izuna's alias, there is the name Inari (Japanese rice god/goddess) which means rice plant.
I'm confused as to how you make hand seals with only one hand though.
Izuna is a bit naive though. You killed your best friend in order to gain the Mangekyou to protect the clan. Right...
Sidenote, who did Madara and Izuna kill to get the Mangekyou? Presumably since they were the first to awaken it, they couldn't know that killing their best friends would have an effect on their sharingan.
So why did they kill them then?
Answers on a postcard, please.

Actually, Gohan really does mean rice, I read that in a thing about Dragon Ball Z. And Izuna seems the be quite the playboy! Poor Take! And what's the Haruno girl going to do? Update soon please!
~Skry~

Oh! Pretty cool! Can't wait to see what you'll come up with next!
~Skry~

...I hate him. So much. *kicks Madara in the shin*

IZUNA, I LOVE YOU!
DEATH GLOMP!
He's such a loser... It just makes me happy (this is a good thing, considering how depressed I've been...).
And he IS a total flirt.

Madara reminds me of Fugaku in SO many ways... DEATH.

Wow, I like the Haruno reference there... DUDE, I JUST GOT AN IDEA. A story about that; only it wouldn't be a Senju woman, it would be a Haruno chick... It's like SasuSaku history-repeats-itself kind of story! WHO!
...
If that made any sense.

The problem is, is that Hashirama could have inspired Madara to get the Kyuubi to later attack Konoha...
Damn girl, I LOVE where this is going!
Hurry up and update, yeah?!

kinda silly in the beginning, made me laugh :D

dunno if I'm too interested yet, cause i'm little too used to the present characters, but it sounds good :D

the title reminds me of Falling Leaves by Billy Talent :P

:E hypheniated

Props for writing about this time period.
A tag-team match between Madara/Izuna and Hashirama/Tobirama sounds very interesting.
I also like your inclusion of all the different clans.

Oh... Me like. Interesting story. I love it how you put the plot ans story into the past instead of the present in Naruto.

I agree with Izuna. He's awesome and I'm well aware his name is Izuna and not anything else. Good for you looking this stuff up and makeing it correct. Madara I love too, but I'm never hating him even if he did take his brother's eyes.

Anyway, keep up the good work. I can't wait for another update. I love it!