This is a lot more angsty and un-fun than the other one, but I'm hoping that just means a happier ending later on. I'll still be here for the next chapter.)

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I read your other story before. REALLY NICE. This one is just friggin' awesome. Is Termina gonna do something, as you hint in the third-to-last paragraph? I hope Link kills that bastard of a king...err, excuse my language there! Grr! I HATE THAT KING! I'd like to take a five-foot scottish claymore and CHOP HIM TO PIECES! GLAH HAH HAH HAH! CHOP CHOP CHOP! ahh... *gets ahold of self* well, please continue (...)

Keep this going, is very good, what will do that greedy king, he better don't do anything that hurt Malon.

Woohoo! You added another chapter! _ And what's this? The King wants Link and Zelda together? Just for his money? *o* I'm aghast!
I like how you showed everything in Zelda's POV, so we see what goes on in the castle Write more sooooooon!

wow! what a twist! write more soon pleez pleez pleez!

Its about bloody time I see some good Link/Malon fanfiction. I'm sick of all these weak and pathetic Link/Zelda stories, they are just so boring and overdone(though I would love to see some Zelda/Malon fics).

Anyways, great story mate, I've been hoping to see more of this. Lets hope that with the new Zelda GC coming later this year that it won't spark more garbage L/Z fics.

eeeeehh! awesome! and the other fic a fairy tale in reality was the ABSOULUTELY best FIC ive ever read not like of a few i mean the BEST! unless ur talking about diff games or animes or watever! i read ur profile! i luv rikku and wakka! its strange a lot of ppl think auron and rikku should be together..isnt auron rikku's uncle o.O *shivver* scary. this is so ooooo awesome kee pitup!-jane-

I loved A Fairytale In Reality and I absolutely LOVE this! You have a great gift, never let it go!

Yo! Please update soon! And...who's the mystery couple? In the summary it says "Zelda/?, ?/?, and Malon/Link"! Who on earth could ?/? be...will you tell me? I just hope they're a REALLY _c_u_t_e_ couple! Please update!

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Write more! I love it!

YOU'VE COME BACK TO US! YAY! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Too sweet! Gah, I have writer's block on my romance...(so what ELSE is new!) So, I read...lots...and this is the PERFECT thing to read! Aw. Next chapter!)

YAY, YOU'RE BACK! How suspenceful! what's gonna happen? what's gonna happen? WRITE MORE!

Yeay! I love Malon/Link. Usually I don't care mush fir Zelda but I feel sorry for her in this fic.

A most interesting story you got going here. Looks to me like Z/G are going to pair up and do something totally evil. Although, I usually frown on character bashing, Zelda bashing is OK in my book!

*stares* , AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! *Bows* YOU'RE SUCH A BETTER AUTHOR THAN LITTLE OLD ME! That was reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally good! It's so convincing. I wonder what's going on! Don't keep me in suspence! Please post the next chapter soon!)