 scarletgold 2009-11-20 . chapter 6I was going to write something Draco-Astoria, so I went to check the stories already available at the site, so I know which is a common concept and which is not. This is something exceptional, though. It's funny, the dialogue is witty (particularly, the library scene and the ministry scenes made me laugh), and it's not the sappy, fluffy, thing most people resort to writing. Your characterization is also refreshing.
Oh, I also loved the epilogue. I know you've published this a long time ago, but I think you deserve to know that one more reader loved your story. :) |
 ThoroughlyConsumed 2009-11-18 . chapter 6Aw!
That was adorable!
Great characterization for Astoria.
It was totally worth procrastinating chemistry work for this! :)
-T.C. |
 maybeknot 2009-09-12 . chapter 6Oh my gosh, totally adorable. |
 dinosoprano 2009-08-30 . chapter 6That was adorable. |
 dinosoprano 2009-08-30 . chapter 4This was definitely my favorite scenario. |
 silvia.elisa 2009-08-29 . chapter 6I'm definitely inspired to write something on Draco and his canon-wife now, the way you characterised her sweet-talked me into this :)
Ah yes, and did you know they took the fake Platform 9 3/4 down? I was one of the last people to take a picture of it last year.. so depressing really!
I think the scenario I like best is the first one though, with Astoria's insight and her not so quiet opinions. |
 Hailey Henz 2009-08-23 . chapter 6I really loved this story! An ingenious idea, coming up with different ways they met. My favorite was definitely the debutante ball. Somehow I always imagined that the Malfoy family attended high function "balls" or parties. So having Draco and Astoria meet there was perfect. Great job!
Maybe you could make another story like this? I know that's kind of hard to do, but maybe something with Scorpius? His birth or just random moments in his life. I don't know. I just enjoy your writing. Keep up the good work. |
 mariahrlg 2009-08-12 . chapter 6Sniff sniff ='(
I'm sad it's over!
But I really liked it! |
 mariahrlg 2009-08-12 . chapter 5Aw! Not fair!
I love this one! |
 mariahrlg 2009-08-12 . chapter 4Oh!
I LOVED IT!
Please let this be a whole story! |
 mariahrlg 2009-08-12 . chapter 3Oh! I loved it!
I wish this would become a whole
fanfic too! |
 mariahrlg 2009-08-12 . chapter 2Oh! How cute! |
 mariahrlg 2009-08-12 . chapter 1I really enjoyed it!
I actually hope this will turn into
a full-blown fanfic one day! |
 Cyanica 2009-08-11 . chapter 6hehe... they were definitely cute! :D |
 Ellentasia 2009-08-11 . chapter 6That was amazing. I think the first one was my favorite, but they were all wonderful. I audibly went "Aww!" at the end. <3 |