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That large gap was me staring dumbfounded at this story. Absolutely amazing. There's not much I can say besides that.

That's it? That's the end? On the one hand, I like, it's a good, solid sort of ending, but at the same time, I wish there was more to the story. Either way, the story was awesome.

-Princess-

Oh, this chapter was just excellent! Excellent. Legendary, even. I could quote all the parts I liked the most, but that'd pretty much be all of it.

-Princess-

I love that Marshall and Lily are just lying to each other about dating other people. It's funny. Well, obviously. And the scene between Marshall and Robin was wonderfully awkward.

-Princess-

Oh... so Barney's not dead and this is sort of a "If Only It Were True/Just Like Heaven" sort of thing. Interesting.

And Marshall saying he's dating Robin is weird and fitting and just odd.

-Princess-

Again, I love this. From Marshall talking about ghosts, to Lily living in Robin's building, to Victoria being back in the story, I love it. Awesome.

-Princess-

"“So you’re crying in a locked bathroom stall because you think I’m dead. Awesome.”

“In what world is this awesome?”

“Because I’ve totally still got it. Necrophilia five.”"

That is a perfectly Barney like thing to say.

Awesome. This whole chapter is awesome.

-Princess-

This continues to be extremely excellent. If this was what had happened, I could easily picture all the characters acting this way.

So, Lily never came back, her and Marshall never got back together, the whole thing with Stella still happened, and Barney actually died and nobody ever met Robin and she actually had a thing with Sandy? And then Barney's a ghost?

Wow. That's unexpected and sad (as in depressing, not as in lame) and awesome all at the same time.

-Princess-

I loved it! It would be awesome if you continued it.

please, please, please, please add more chapters. It is a great story. Please finish it for dweebs like me.

Amazing story! I was crying and laughing all around.

When I started reading it I was sad. But you captured Barney's energy even as a "ghost". Please finish the story. Brlliant concept

I just got into HIMYM and this is one of the first fics I've read. I can only pray that the rest are this well written. The pacing and dialogue were, dare I say, awesome. Please write a sequel or at the very least, another Barney/Robin story. Keep up the great work.

This is really, really well written. I love the basis of the plot. I'm generally not into AU stories, especially from HIMYM, but this is one of the best that I've read. So, thank you for writing it! By any chance, are you planning a sequel, because the ending's a bit of a tease. I hope you are, because this story was absolutely brilliant!