great story :) please cont??

Wow I loved that so much! Jensen beat her and her enemy was the one to help her. How cool is that?

loved it these two r great
maria

Hey Cherrygirl

Havent seen you for a while. Love this fic though, I like the purposeful misleading at the beginning totally caught me off guard when all he wanted to do was help. Well done, you still got it. I'm still wading throught the waters of my fic which you've been so awesome to consult with me on, I should be writing more over the summer, so I can't wait to work with you again. Cheers!

What happened to Tru? What did Jensen do to her, and why? Why did she let him? I want to know, and I want to kill him!

(Jack’s manipulative seduction was met with a quick smack in the face.)
("Are you always like this every time you want to get into a girl’s pants?”
“Ouch,” Jack mocked with feigned hurt. “You almost cut a nerve there, Tru. I’d be careful with that dirty mouth of yours.”)

These lines cracked me up :D
Are you going to finish the story? I really want to know the answes to the questions I raised in the beginning.

This was so good, Lara! So sad about what Tru had to go through and Jack being her hero in desguise! It's also really angsty, which i love, cause through it all I was hoping that Jack would kiss Tru and she would kiss him right back.