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wuzi
2009-12-28 . chapter 3
Please, please update soon! *^-^* I really love this story
wuzimiko
2009-11-30 . chapter 3
please update! *^-^*

and I think Takuechi is Ryoma's mother's surname, but why is Ryoma's surname of his mother and not father?
Gyokuei Kuragari
2009-11-13 . chapter 3
Haha, that's cool. =]

Hm, not too much happening in this chapter, but this story only just started! Yay for Thrill. =3
What's up with you and "Takeuchi" though? XD

Oh, heh, it took me forever to get around to read this update this time. School is getting really hectic.
MARYLOVER
2009-10-31 . chapter 3
Thrill for next chapter? yes! now go and start writing it right now!
I like the fact you´re still developing the characters, not entering into them faster. And Sho seems so intriguing, I kind of want to know more about him. Bye
Skryrssb
2009-10-29 . chapter 3
Nice!! You always never fail to surprise me with ur plots and never disappoint me with good writing... thanks.. guess will just have to wait for the next chapeter of thrill!
Tenisu no Ojou-sama Kagome
2009-10-29 . chapter 3
It's very good, I can' wait till the next chapter is posted...

xKagi-chanx
tsub4ki
2009-10-29 . chapter 3
Shion is just adorable! and Asuka is very practical. It is indeed easier if other people assume that Sho and her are involved. Furthermore, it lends an added layer of deception on the fake persona she and Ryoma are creating. The Takahashis can keep on dreaming, neither Ryoma nor Asuka is stupid enough to be fooled by them
Friend of a Friend
2009-08-23 . chapter 2
this is so much fun to read. Please update soon!
Playgirl Eugene
2009-07-25 . chapter 2
I don't have anything else to say but hilarious!

I love this! This and Frozen are at the top of my favourite list beside The Devil Prince and Cocky Tensai, Fated, and A Second Chance.
thfourteenth
2009-07-04 . chapter 2
ah, i understand(:
MARYLOVER
2009-06-30 . chapter 2
Now, if you look carefully at the options of your poll, Frozen is not on the list, so... I think the tie has broken unfairly.
Now I can see you're the master of OC's, you have filled this chapter with Sho and Asuka and I didn't got mad for the bits of Syuusuke or Ryoma.
And, is it that you're having a soft spot for children this time and are having a babies/kids-stage? hehehe.
alchino
2009-06-30 . chapter 2
I want more thrill pair action
Please update as soon as possible ^-^
Gyokuei Kuragari
2009-06-30 . chapter 2
Hahah! "Or do you prefer 'Ore-sama'?" That made me laugh.

Asuka is an interesting character. Haha.

Love the end of the chapter. ;D
Fuji and Ryoma know each other from...Something? xD
Nemesis Crow
2009-06-28 . chapter 2
wwii.. i like it.. poor Ryoma.. and Poor Fuji.. i think fuji is goig to make a lot of troubles.. hehehe uplond soon please!!
afallenheart
2009-06-27 . chapter 2
Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE!
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