I like your story. It was very well written. Are you going to do another one?

It make an interesting plot to describe Alex and Maggie finding out the truth about Mike. (Just an idea!)

Anyway, thanks!

coowl, very nice:D

He watched the game in the uniform? That's not just "douche", it's plain embarrassing! Aw well, having him change into something more comfortable would be illogical.

Good story. It flowed well.

OH MY GOD. that was actually really great. sensational, even.
good job.
i liked that story a lot, kinda makes me wish they had wrapped up the ending in that way- mike being young and all.
but glad i could read it here.
thanks again. good good job!

Somehow I think I like this ending better. gr8 job!

Wow, I really enjoyed the movie, but I think I would have liked your version of the ending even more! It really adds depth and transitions between Mike/Mark nicely. I wish that this had actually been the ending - great job!

Aww yes! I really had wanted to see Mike go back in and support Alex after working with him so hard with basketball. Nice job!

Hey!

I'd been restraining myself from reading this story because I hadn't seen it BUT today, I went to the cinema, by myself, to see it. Can you believe it? Only TODAY I went to see it which is disgraceful really because it's been out for almost two weeks here I think, maybe a bit more.

But OMG, I really didn't think I could love Zac any more BUT sweet baby jesus! I'm kinda glad I saw it by myself because I think my constant squealing and giggling like a fool would have pissed off the person I was with.

Anywhoo, let's talk about your AWESOME story :D OMG! I can totally, totally see your version of the story in the film instead of the other! I think yours seem more realistic (and yes I know, the whole plot of the film is fairly unrealistic) but, I think yours would've looked better!! :D

I am totally in love with Mark right now! :D Although, I think at the very beginning with Mike as 17, when he was shooting the basket balls shirtless, that may have been the best bit - I even thought his crazy hair was rather sexy :D But yes, I think I am going to have to go and see this film again!

Awesome story, Dani. Really really really good - I freaking loved it! Can't wait for more of your updates :P

Abi x x x

Aw, that was really sweet. You were really good at portraying the characters, it felt like those characters would actually say those things. =D

Aw Dani I loved it. YAY for Scarlet kissing Zac!Mike! Totally how it should of been *sigh* I love how you brought up so many good themes from the movie. I loved Maggie telling Mike he looked like a douche in the basketball uniform LOL. So adorable, funny & romantic! Great job!

Aww that was very short but very sweet. I like this ending to the story better, honestly. Great job, Dani! This was rounded really nicely and I liked seeing how you would've liked the movie to end. Amazing as usual!

That would've been a great ending for the movie. Great job!

oh, so cute! I loved this, it was sweet and a wonderful story. Great job!

better than the orginal! love it ;)

Dani this is evidence that you can write anything. Your writing style is unique and absolutely fantastic. I really enjoyed your take on the ending and it definitely adds to the story. I wish the movie had ended this way. Anyway great job!