loved it ! thanks for a great read

write a Sequal oh i didn't think said it, please?

1. The plot is fantastic for a one-shot because it made me feel as if I was reading a lengthy chapter story. That's great as an author.

2. However, the swearing words sounded OOC for the characters. It was rather unusual for them especially for someone like Hermione.

3. It's good that the story is arranged in paragraphs but it seems that there aren't any scene breaks and it confuses me a bit. Anyway, it's not really a big issue. xD

4. The one night stand part between Hermione Lucius was surprising and original but I couldn't actually imagine the real Hermione being like that. Hehehe.

5. Oh and one more thing, your rating should be T or M because the fact that you used swear words the scenes are not suitable for younger readers.
Have a nice day...

Loved it! This was the first Lucius/Hermione fanfic I have ever read. I hope you write more x

Loved it so much thanks for a great read ! 3SVOV

wow good job. i enjoyed reading this.

This story is amazing, must have a extention to it! I do love the thought processes that Hermione goes through.-MRC

Sequel? Love the story but I think T would be the appropriate rating:D

Hello,

i don't, wether you remember me asking for translate your story, but I post it in the internet yet.
here is the link for it
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best wishes

Sevena Malfoy

Very good fic I really liked!

I'd love to know what happens after this!

Thanks

Did you write a sequel to this? I'm going to check and if you have I'll read it...and review every chapter like a crazy person. I really enjoyed this.

Kindest Regards

ER

The page breaks did disappear but it was still a fairly easy read. I enjoyed reading that, although I want something sinister to happen to ron. I sad to see there won't be other chapters. Maybe an After Story!

This story was amazing! I loved it I didn't like how hermione didn't say anything though until she couldn't stand it well I really liked your story!

A good little story, I would have liked to learn more though of what happens next. Well done!

WOW!

Excellent!

I look forward to future chapters...