Very, very sweet. I liked it a lot! :D

This story has a nice plot line, and flows really well. You've done very well!

I'll b keeping track of this one, so I hope U upd8 soon!

B reading U!

Great, sweet chapter. I felt so sorry for Inuyasha. Sesshoumaro is the only one able to ease his pain.

nice story. It sounds like in his grief Inu is replacing his wife and kids with Sess.

You could end it right here,but then you could also keep it going. By the time I got to the end of the chapter I was looking for more.