Wow, you're really good at writing House, think I'll go have a look around your other stories now. Thank you.

Hi Zay,

Very, very, very well done! I absolutely loved this 'episode'!

I hope you can write another one soon!

Is there any way you can make anymore of these in the nearby future? Because this felt more like an episode of House than the OFFICIAL episodes all this season! A bit of something for everyone without going overboard.

GREAT job and I highly recommend you do more. You can only get better with practice, right?

Wow...you need to send this to David Shore with a job application, because this is seriously amazing. I saw the whole thing play out in my head-it was /exactly/ like a real episode, everyone was completely in character and it was just...amazing.
Seriously. Words cannot describe the awesome.
-Rasberry Parfait

LET HER LIVE! lol

It's 'Valentines day', she's got to live!

You're still doing a great job!!

WOW!

This chapter was AMAZING! You've done a really good job capturing House's attitude and sarcasm. The medical stuff is simply amazing... although, considering i just called it 'medical stuff', clearly i have no idea if its all true or not ;)

You're doing an amazing job! keep up the good work!

This is brilliant!

It's so believable - the characters, the dialogue, everything! Are you sure you're not a writer of House? ;)

This is great so far!! I personally like how it's like an actual episode- it must be hard to get the right feel in a fic, but I think you've hit it right on the head. Keep writing please!

lol. I love this story. You should sumbit it to the HOUSE producers or something. It's really good. :D
I can't wait for more!

Woaw. That clinic scene was epic.

Epic in a great way. Because that can pretty much be mistaken for a real clinic scene from the show. It was that epic.

I loved the entire 'theme' I guess you could say, to this clinic visit. The hypocrisy thing. Because it's realistic. and the way House narrowed down on her about her being a hypocrite and her anorexia was spot on. It sounded so House like. Are you sure your not a writer for the show? No, you can't be... you actually write Cuddy in character...

House is such a butt to Cuddy. xD I love it! And the differential (there's the word!) was very fun to read. But then again, your entire story is. :)

Great chapter darling! I can't believe you were nervous about posting this, yeesh... Can't wait for more!

Ex to that sexy little O here in New York you shall be seeing soon. :)

Liz

Aw! ^3^ I love (loved? ;.; ) Kutner! He's so adorable! And he's such a dork too, but he is definately the type to try to get House in a Valentiney mood. I have a feeling this bet may fall into Kutner's favor, si? ;D

The team's discussion was very well written (in character - I don't think I need to mention that every chapter though, do I?) and interesting. Of course the boys all join in on the betting and Thirteen is the only one not to. I actually like her in your story. She isn't a hogger of all the dialouge. ;D

LOL at the pap smear. Poor Luke. He is quite annoying - the families always are. But I guess it's understandable. It was still funny as hell though. ;D

Zay-luv, I cannot bare to wait another day for an update, but I suppose I shall have to! At least House is actually ON tonight. But I love your fic, love where it's going, and have I said thank you yet? xD

ILY!

Ex to that o over there... being Saad... O:

Liz

Sorry for the late review. D:

Dude. Oh. My. God. xD

This could not be any funnier or in character. Seriously, I haven't a clue as to why you had doubts at all - this is all brilliant.

Oh my gosh, House is such an ASS! I love him! I must quote my favorite lines;

“You look nice too. Your hair is fluffier than a new puppy – it’s, like, boy-band sexy!” - What an idiot. xD

“Totally, home-skillet.” - That line was so Wilson. I can totally imagine him saying something like that. :)

“Cuddy? Is that really you behind those enormous mounds of flesh mounted upon your chest?” LOL. What a jerk! I totally choked on my water laughing there. :)

“God, woman, no, I’ve already told you I will not have sex with you!” - -topples over laughing- Holy crap. No words can describe how awesome that line was. X)

There's pretty much a million more, but there is nothing worse then a review that is all quotes from your fic. xD But seriously, this chapter was just so quotable and hilarious and House-like. And by House-like I mean the show itself. The team's conversation (forgot what it's called, yikes) over the patient was just bloody brilliant, smooth, and original.

You really deserve ALOT of credit. The dialogue here is superb, the content is brilliant and it's just so fun to read! Stop doubting yourself about this love, it's brilliant!

I love you tons, and I must thank you again for writing this. You're a just too awesome. :)

Xooxoxoxox,

Liz

Lol. I really like it so far.
I promised myself I wouldn't read this story until it was finished, because I usually cannot stand having to wait for an update. which I know isn't the author's fault, but it's still frustrating. :)
but it's ok.
this story is looking really good.
I love your characterization for House, Wilson, and Cuddy. You're doing a great job with them.
I bet they're really complicated to write about, so kudos to you!
Well, I can't wait for more!

and remember, one more day until the new episode. it looks fabulous! :D

-T.C.

It's crazy how in character this is. You're an amazing writer - I can easily see this all happening on the show.

Umm, so I totally lied and read this now because it's short and quick and I was way too eager to let it linger in my inbox and collect dust for an hour. :)

So basically, yey! I am so excited to finally have this posted! It seems like it took forever to finally get to my birthday, seeing as this was basically the only thing I was really looking forward to. Har har. ^^

Anyvay, this most certainly resembled the beginning of a House episode! I can already see how Luke is going to be a pain in the ass in House's eyes. x3 And Elizabeth just sounds like someone I know but I just can't /place/ it... green eyes... want's the be a baker... it's like I know her... ;D

I definately enjoyed reading this - it was simple yet detailed in a sophisticated and intelligent manner. I can actually sort of feel how the coughing would feel - yeck, but points to you for creating the imagery. ;D

'She sounded choked, grated – like a fork in a garbage disposal.'

That line in particular. Grah. Painful.

-seizures- Aww, lovely you are TOO good to me! I am thrilled to finally see this up and /cannot/ wait for more! I especially can't wait to see House enter the scene since he's such a jerk and you're great at writing him! :) Thank you, thank you for writing this darling! You're the best!! Love joo. ;D

I shall call you and nag you to post more soon tomorrow. ;D ILY!

Ex to not just the sexiest o ever, but to the sexier then Chase's fluffy hair o, which is right ovah thar,

Liz