Aw! This was so touching! XDD! On the next one!

It's so different! I love it! I would of never thought of an idea like this!

this story made me cry... why? Don't go..

oh my god! I cryed! this was so sad!

Really Nice story, I love Hiruma thinks about Sena. And, so tragic that I suddenly cried at the end of the story. XD

Well. I haven't read much of the Eyeshield21 manga before, but I thought I'd give this fic a chance anyway. And to be honest, I'm really glad I did.
It's absolutely brilliant. I haven't read something this well-written in a while. The words and descriptions you use convey a lot of angsty and dark emotions... I thought it was easy to follow along with the plot too. It was deep and meaningful without being complicated. So, Congratulations on that.
For some reason, I liked it when Hiruma referred to Sena as the 'fucking puppet'. That was cool.

I think that's all I have to say. I hope you'll continue writing!
CHH

*sniff*... WAAH. That was sad but awesome at the same time...*sniff* Bwo.

Ah.. w-wha-? -bursts into tears- OMFG, WHY! That was so SAD! T_T But it was still so GOOD, DAMN YOU! Why must you make me love something so sad! ;.
For real, though, good job. I hope Sena gets reincarnated. Because I don't want it to end like that for them both!

G-good job, still. -cries-

ugh,,so Sad! Good Fic!

Mind to make HiruSena Tragedy fic again?

Wow... thats so sad D: I really do hope you have a sequel planned cause that ending leaves plenty to imagine! Great job!

Aww... Such a wonderful story... You are awesome.

Saskie

VERY clever, very interesting, very original. I liked the way you wrote the ending.

so sad!*sniff
poor Hiru-chan!

aw... Ó.Ò so sad! will be an epilogue?

HWA! *sniff* SENA!

I really am crying when I typed this...

So sad..so heart wrecking..yet it's not too OOC..

I really love this part"hating human, loving puppet..is it the right thing?
Beautiful...*still tearful* I could feel Hiruma's feeling here..*cry*