Spirited, clever, and well thought out. Nice structure.
It's got a Mary Sue... and she's wonderful. Literally the only Mary Sue I have ever liked.(I'm hunting for godawful fics, which means for Mary Sues, which is why I mention it).

A great fic.

great! truly in the spirit of 'Sandman', this is the only category in this site I've found some real treasures this was one

I really liked the concept behind this. I hope, though, never to wake up in Gene Roddenberry's tomorrow.
Elmy

awesome! love it!

Well. That was profound. And moving. To tell you the truth, I hadn't thought of the girl in the poem as you until I read your note, just as... someone... anyone... with hope for the future.

Anyway, great poem.

Intresting

How strange! I feel... I don't know, moved or something. It was good to see Orwell, Asimov and Roddenberry back in the Dreaming, where they belong... I dont' know about Verne, though. I think I would have chosen someone else... maybe Wilde, but I'm not sure. Great work anyway!