 Cheruth 2009-11-15 . chapter 17Wow, I love it. A lot. What a great set up for a story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Loved the way Ashley was written. It was obvious that she wasn't shocked or even upset to be there. More annoyed at having to wait. So she had to have known death was coming. Because she was old? Or sick?
I love the ambiguous nature of the place. Not heaven or hell or purgatory. It just is. You were alive and now you are here.
Obviously can't wait for me Spencer and Ashley interaction.
Thank you for posting. |
 Gentry 2009-11-14 . chapter 17Well this is interesting, I'm curious to see where it goes. |
 LyricalHarmony53 2009-11-14 . chapter 17interesting concept. can't wait for more :) |
 maeisforlovers 2009-11-14 . chapter 17wow I love the beginning! such a unique idea. post soon! |
 letsbefrankimawkward 2009-11-14 . chapter 17I always love reading stories about people after they die. I know that sounds a little weird, but I find it very interesting to hear everyone's own interpretation of what happens, even if you don't actually believe it. This is great and I can't wait to figure out why Ashley was suddenly young, if she had been older before. I also get the feeling that Spencer died awhile ago and that she was also older because of the phrase she used, "cutie pie." Anyway, great job. I can't wait for more. Your stories are always great.
Get it. Got it. Good. |
 01shane01 2009-11-14 . chapter 17cool! i cant wait to see what happens |
 moviemusicwritingbooksfreak 2009-11-14 . chapter 17epic win dude |
 SouthSP91 2009-11-13 . chapter 17oh this just got a whole lot more interesting!
i am very intrigued!
you must post more soon. Please?
&& it's good to have u baqk...=] |
 Gentry 2009-06-23 . chapter 16Cute finish. I want a table 8 all to myself. One with Ashley or Spencer at it. |
 Gentry 2009-06-23 . chapter 15Aw very cute. That's an adorable first date. |
 Gentry 2009-06-23 . chapter 14Vacations without internet aren't that much fun. But I'm enjoying this mini story. |
 jbs10 2009-06-23 . chapter 16Aww...I really loved this one. Thanks for sharing. |
 Riba77 2009-06-23 . chapter 16héhé! Soo cute! I loved the ending!
everything you write is fantastic! so keep going!
<3<3<3<3 |
 Kelly 2009-06-23 . chapter 16 I REALLY enjoyed your "Table 8" story. It was really cute. Although it was a short story, it was very intense and packed with emotion. I absolutely LOVED IT.
Seriously, you're so amazing and talented. You amaze me with each new chapter or story you create. Please, do keep up the wonderful work. |
 chloedarko 2009-06-23 . chapter 16Haha bad ass madison rules. Very cute little story. |