Oh I love this story, it totally ATE MY LIFE D: Continue it, please, please PLEASE! It is so well written and beautiful and fluffy and aw I LOVE IT. It made my cry xD I love it a lot

OHKAY. so.
I really want you to know, that this truly is, the most well written fan fiction I have ever read. I think I'm in love with this story. A friend recommended it to me, and I was originally a little put off by the fact that it was link/linebeck because of the age difference, but believe me when I say, you have converted me. And it's not about...you know...but more about the emotional side of their relationship. I love how you have so perfectly captured what there relationship would be like if it was a real story. You keep Linebeck gruff, but you manage to give him this extra depth that is so heart-breakingly endearing. You bring in these extra situations that don't happen in the game, completely naturally, maintaining character personalities, and adding so much extra depth and emotion. I LOVE THIS STORY. Thank you, so much, for writing such a wonderful story, I am enjoying this so much. I was having such a bad depression episode during the night, and I swear to you, this story has completely brought me out of it. I know this is annoying to hear, but I really do hope you continue with it. It would be a shame to stop such a wonderful story!

Hahahahahahahahahaa oh Romanos. I hate to say it, but Romanos' thoughts...kind of turned me on T_T
I wonder if he will prove to be a sort of hinderance on their relationship with his views on male relationships...
I don't understand how this story only has 20 reviews so far! This is far better than most fan fictions I've read in the past years. honestly! I guess it's not as popular a pairing as others...

ah HEART HEART HEART
As sad as it is, I love their first big fight you've written. Linebeck would react angrily because of his defensive character, and link would be the voice of reason. I like how you've switched POV in this one, with link going to the temple. It's so interesting to read about him going through the temple just like I've played it! As he was entering it, I was wondering "doesn't he need a fairy with him, and wouldn't that fairy be disaproving of his being there?". But you didn't miss a beat! You used leaf instead. ah i love this story so much!

Well, Linebeck isn't the only one whose crying. I've truly enjoyed this story so far. You've stayed true to the characters (I greatly dislike OOC) and you've brought out this soft side in Linebeck I knew he had (I'm currently at the temple of courage, so I haven't finished the game).
The last 1/4 of this chapter broke my heart with how sweet you told it. I didn't find it corny like moments like these usually are, it was very moving and touching. Really well done <3

I can has more? D:

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I was so engrossed in your story i forgot this was fanfiction. I thought it was an actual book.
Everything is perfect. Balance is what i belive makes a good story. The humor, seriousness, sadness, and all that is in perfect balance to me. Trust me, you had me giggling like a manic then almost in tears and in anticipation throughout the 5 chapters you've written.

You have to continue this. I really enjoyed reading it and am looking forward to reading more if you decide to continue. =]

Oh, I like this story! Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon!

I was terrified and discussed at the end of chapter 4! That was the greatest thing I've ever read! I think my face turned inside out when I read that part <3 I can't wait for more!!

I'm a little confused, I got three alerts for this stories chapters 6,7, and 8, I read chapter six, but when I clicked chapter seven, it said it wasn't on here...then I clicked chapter six this morning, and it said it wasn't on here either!

I'm confuzzled. ^-^''

WORST. PUZZLE. EVER.

I sat there staring at the screen for like, an hour before I closed it and kept it closed for a couple days to figure out wtf I was supposed to do. gargh. Celia doesn't even give you any good hints.

This is great! :] Please continue.

How refreshing to find a story that uses the fine details of the game to illustrate the plot. This is easily one of the best fanfictions I have EVER read, because of your care to use proper spelling and grammar, and how you have captured the characters so well. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

I love this story so much.

Wait, is it finished?

It doesn't say!! :[

If you've been updating it on dA, please post it on here too :D

Or, I could search on dA for you... >:D

But it's the greatest LxL story I've ever read. IMHO. Plz continue :3

~TyLee793 8D

I'm going to cosplay the mechanic.