HI. I've been going on a crazy Narnia kick lately so I've actually read a lot of your stories, I just don't review them (I know, bad habit, I'm sorry). But I just wanted to say that this story is just so much more... deep i guess, that's a bad word but yeah. I am not a Christian, but I have actually studied Christianity a lot, and I accepted the fact that I would get a lot of Christian ideas when I decided to dive into this fandom. But with this story, you managed to actualy clarify a concept in the Bible that has managed to escape my understanding; the testing of Abraham. I've never been able to see the logic in God asking Abraham this, but now I think I do.
Please don't get offended by me comparing your work to the Bible because I'm not doing that (don't get egotistical either that's flat out dangerous). I'm just saying that by reading your story, I've managed to use the parallels between them to finally connect the dots that go in Abrahm's story, so now I understand Christianity just a little bit better, and I always like to learn. So thank you.

I loved this story. It is beautifully written, and it touches my heart whenever I read it.
Thanks for writing such a marvelous story.

I loved it
I love it

And i love also that your inspiration came from the Bible :)
It was fantastic :)

I turned away from organised religion years ago, but believe me when I say that reading this made me want to pick up the Bible and read the testing of Abraham.

Love. This. It really ties into the Abraham story (of course, seeing as it's pretty much the same idea). You wrote Peter's delema wonderfully, both boys were nicely in character.

Really love this one

This is great. You are a wonderful writer.

Thank you for refraining from killing Edmund. I just finished reading Nor Cease In Singing Twilight, and it left me rather scarred... but this is a beautiful little study of the difficulties in choosing between loyalty and loyalty. At least Peter didn't have to live with the consequences of his choice this time.

Jehovah-Jireh
My God Will Provide.
Oh yeah. Great work as always!

I love this story. I have read it several times, but I never got the chance to review. I love the way you incorporated the bible into this story. Most Narnia stories do, like it or not, but the way this was done is just incredible. I would love to see more stories like this or perhaps even a little bit of an extension of this. Thanks for writing this, I never would have thought up an idea like this.

Ashleigh

Hahaha I love that! I love how it's like issac and Jacob thx!

Aw...I loved this story, and i immediately noticed the similarities between this story an Abraham's...Loved how you brought everything so beautifully together though...And Edmund being awake the whole time! That was genius, pure genius! Loved it!

Wow. I love Bible/Narnia parallels, and a shiver went through me when the Paw of Aslan intervened. And then when Edmund was *awake*-his duty and love is as heartbreaking as Peter's, and this story has, I think, shaken me more than Abraham's ever did. You're amazing.

That was wonderful.

And thank you for standing up for what was intended by Lewis when he created these people. Well done.

I recognized the parallel right off. Very well done. You had me in tears. (Now I need to go find a tissue...)