i loved the ending. it was hilarious. my favorite lines were, "Leaving pie unfinished while sitting with Dean Winchester would be like committing a mortal sin in front of God." and "Chuck’s not stupid, he’s written about Dean for four years, and Dean is nothing if not blasphemous on his best days." great job.

Hahaha!

I LOVE Chuck, and dude, I want an inner-Bobby? Is there someplace to pick one of those up?

This was great. =D

BRILLANT ending, I loved that, made me laugh out loud :D

*snickers* that was adorable! Lovely job!

I love sea salt. Haha. And I really like Chuck - and therefore this fic. (And also Ronald. That actor is good in everything I see him in.)

I think the style came off pretty well. I mean, we didn't get a huge sample of what Chuck's writing was like, but for what he did get, you got. :)

Keep up the good work.