Very interesting way to explain Max & Alec's growing relationship but what's with the numbered headlines?

I really love this story. It is so great to see a fic out there, that's not just about Max and Alec having like, a one-night stand, or something. It was also really cool that you didn't have her refering to him as a screw up. I hate that in stories. I know she thought that of him at the beginning of the series, but I think she stopped thinking of him like that after a while. I loved the way you showed how they grew with each other, and how they became a couple without really realizing it.

I do wish that Max wouldn't have depended on Alec quite so much in parts of it. I just think she's stronger than that. It did make the story more dynamic though, so good on that.

Great job on the whole thing! Love your style of writing, and I can't wait to read more from you!

clumsybookgirl13

wonderful story, simple and enjoyable

I really love the progression in this, of how Alec and Max became so comfortable with each other so that eventually everyone assumed they were a couple.

I wouldn't complain if you decided to add more to it.

please finish this story. It is really good.
thanks kim

iliked very much it was very interesting plot and i loved ilove max alec pair they have chemistry and are perfect together

this story is so ridiculously awesome and i really hope this isn't the end

This is great! I'm an M/A addict so this is right up my alley. Thanks for a great fic.

Great job. I really liked see the progression of their relationship. I really enjoyed this, I'm looking forward reading more from you in the future.

i loved the story, really, really loved. have you thought about doing a sequel?

i loved this. honestly, one of the best things ive read in a long time

Really enjoyable read! Thank you! Please continue this story, I'd love to read more ..or other DA stories. Love your style, you really have a talent.

Really enjoyed this piece. I like the time line style of the writing, it's not a style that you see often but it's well done here with the right balance of dialogue and description all in the right tenses and everything.

Great job, I look forward to reading more of your work.

~A

This is a BRILLIANT piece of work! It's one of the best DA fics I've read!
Excellent pace and you've showed their pogression really well. I only wish we got to see something like this on the show.
Job well done! Looking forward to reading more DA fics from you! :D

Nice :) Very nice :) Good length, good rhythm, happy ending :)