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Magali
2009-11-24 . chapter 20
Killing Maria's husband, huh? Ouch. Wait until Michael realizes who Maria's husband was. He's in for a shock, then. Will he be able to do anything to Rath, I wonder.
Loz
2009-10-01 . chapter 20
Hey your back!

Great update, so want Micheal to make it up to her and to change her back to the old Maria (although I understand she'll still have her scars).

It'll be nice to see the relationship switched with Maria being the distant closed off one and Micheal being the persisting patient one.

Please please please update soon
Paradise Desdemona
2009-09-30 . chapter 20
I have to say, this update made my day. I'm so happy with the way you have Michael evolving, and how the tables have turned between he and Maria. As always, I can't wait to read more!
sunglasses in the rain
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
wow has this story really been going on for like 8 years?
Magali
2009-07-04 . chapter 19
That is so sad. Maria lost Michael and she started to drink? Then she met Rath and life seemed to get better, even if she hadn't forgotten Michael. But then, Rath turned into a monster, leading to Maria being unhappy and a victim of domestical abuse. And she drank again, and had affairs with plenty of other guys?

She is really broken. She is right when she says that Michael doesn't know her. And she can't believe him when he tells her that he loves her: she doesn't love herself, how could a man love her? Even worse after he learns what she has done, all the men, Rath...

It's easy to say that love conquers it all, but the fact is that Michael ran away and had a great life, and Maria was left behind just like with her father and she lived hell. How could Michael and Maria move on past that, if they get back together? Because as intense as they are, Maria will throw into Michael's face about him abanding her like her father did and being happy without her, while Michael will throw into her face Rath and the other men, and the drinking.

Really tough situation.

Glad to see you back. I hope you will udpate your other story.
Magali
2009-07-04 . chapter 18
Oh, damn misunderstanding, Maria heard the word "commitment" and "Cara" and she thought that Michael was talking about marrying this other girl? Oy! This is going to suck. Maria has led a sad life while Michael seems to have it all. Friend, talent, a future...
Scorpio6
2009-07-01 . chapter 19
Welcome back...Thanks for two great chapters. I hope that you can come back soon. I love the suspense...Maria relapsing is sad but I am surpise it did not happen when he returned to town...Anyhow, come back soon because I really miss this story.
Paradise Desdemona
2009-07-01 . chapter 19
Love the update, but you're mean for leaving it there!
Loz
2009-06-30 . chapter 19
Wow! Great story, No Michael can't leave and who is Cara?!?!?!

Please update soon
Not-What-I-Seem
2009-06-30 . chapter 19
good chapter, although i am still wondering what happened to liz but anyway keep up the good work.
Charming Seductress
2009-02-10 . chapter 17
Next chapter please... this is really interesting, I haven't seen anything like it and I can't wait to see where you take it!!
Lucas4everPeyton
2008-12-15 . chapter 17
I like what I am reading...its good so far...but if there is no Liz...and as far as i know there should be...that would make this better...besides it seems they ALL owe Maria some big fat apologies...and pplease dont take 7 years to finish this...
maji343
2008-12-09 . chapter 17
Absolutely can't wait for more!
Magali
2008-12-06 . chapter 17
I'm surprised by how the Maria-Liz relationship turned out. I suppose that Liz lost it with Maria, after being separated from Max for so long, because of his quest to find Michael?
Scorpio6
2008-12-05 . chapter 17
welcome back. cant wait for the next chapter.
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