| Reviews for: Pathos Installment One: Gentle |
 brissygirl.livejournal.com 4/30/09 . chapter 1 I found this in atypicalsnowman's journal on Lj so i thought i better read this before i read teasing.
I was very sweet I'm glad Severus didn't scoff at Harry's fears and took the time to explain to him why it wasn't possible.
Severus' murmurered 'i love you' at the end was so tender it makes me wish he was mine. *pouts
Good job guys! |
 Kitty Black Cat 4/25/09 . chapter 1OMG! That is so true! I've seen a lot of mpeg fics and in the HP universe there was always an explanation of how the baby lives in the guys body, you know with maginc creating a uterus and stuff, which was an acceptable though still somewhat farfretched theory for a magical universe, but no one and I mean NO ONE has ever thought or at least mentioned how in the world 2 spermatozoid can create a baby! This is so good. It made me laugh 'cause I hadn't even thought of the YY factor! Anyway, this is a cute, adorable oneshot that is well written and with content that I obviously enjoyed. Good job! |
 Mord-Sith Rahl 4/25/09 . chapter 1Aww, this is so cute and adorable. .
And I just read your profile icon and chuckled out loud, and now my family is staring at me funny, AGAIN. Well, moments before I had sighed and "aww"ed, so whatever.
Finally though, someone mentioned the YY thing. |
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