intersting start cant wait to see where you take this

I was only really interested becaus eyou said yami wasn't gonna have the puzzle and I wanted to know how the hell that would happen. Oh well. *sigh* like many other stories I suppose this one just og tleft.

Looks good! Can't wait for the next chappie! (lol, I tried the number thing)

okay weird story a little hard to follow so far, but go with it, lets see What seto Kaiba brings to the mix.

good chapter

Cool! The whole phone port/code thing confused me a little bit, but this is exciting! I can't wait for more!

0o, this is a promising story! I love your use of the present tense - it makes it unique, and you pull it off so nicely! Great job.

If I give you my adress, can you airmail me the cookies? :P You know, you almost made me cry when you said that this woudn't be a prideshipping story, it's my OTP! But rules are meant to be broken, right? Can't you make it in to a shonen-ai? Please! Still love the story though. Hugs for you and you muse!

oh, nice ending 2 the chapter. please update soon, 'k? i'll be waiting 2 read more!

Yay! Although the fact that I already read this kind of takes the thrill out of it. xD

Humph. I still haven't forgotten that you plan to make Yami go all *you kno what* (sry, but anyone could read this *wink*). You are going to have to pay for my hospital bills for when I have a heart attack for reading that part. *glares*

Anyways. Yay! Um...you know that thing with the MOK? 3-7-1-9...um..isn't that an 'X'...wait, OH, I GET IT! Sorry, forgot about the tracing the path part. xD Nevermind.


~Darkie

I found you're story! So you're a Prideshipper fan, eh? -blinks thoughtfully-

Keep it up!


~Darkie

Excellent start! I look forward to more!