HEY! I loved it! Write some more!

This is a cute story. I hope Avalon finally meets Edward. Nakeesha is cool :-)

Man, keep up with this writting. Seriously there are a few on going Fanfiction of this type.

very nice story would love to read more.PLZ update soon

Amazing story can't wait for the next one! :D

This is amazing. I like how you don't focus only on Avalon and bring out the thoughts of each of the characters. Your writing is also very good, makes me want to read more. In other words, I hope to see continuation ^.^

Hm. I have been stating that I despise Edward/OC, but that is usually because the only ones I've seen before have wacko punk-goth girls. If this turns into a romance, I'd be willing to stick to it. I'll keep reading!

i really like this story! is it going to be edward/oc??