Ha ha, exceedingly "noice". :P Hope you update soon. ^_^

I always thought Tornado's were never friendly.

Jet: What was that?!

Quiet! I never meant you!

Ahem, please continue.

Nice chapter Kiba Sniper or should I say...Kiba Powa! Lolz, I'm really bored, sorry. I liked the trial, kind of interesting me in a different sort of way. Update soon please.

Hooray! You're back! Hope you're feeling ok. Just take your time with this. I've certainly missed the crazy style of writing and Riolu. Looks like Gale and Zed have learnt to work together. Hopefully they won't get into more fights. Update as soon as you can

Great job, these challenges were really cool and I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon, I can't wait for Zed and Gale to kick cursed pirate butt!

Great chapter, as always. Gale and his crew were able to get through the Elemntals, learning lessons along the way. Now what is the next adventure in store for them. Update.

Gale, Gale, Gale...will you ever change your ways? I guess not. Ah well. Great chapter, and it's good to see an update from ya, Kiba. I await the next chapter.

Everyone just loves falling on their faces. XD

Gale: *Stares at Tornado's chest*

Aleena: BASTARD!

When you're ready to get back to work, just contact me and I'll provide all the information needed. Update very,very,very,very,very,very,very soon.

(Throws a rock at Gale) you're lucky I can't strangle you Gale, you're an idiot. (Laughs) This was a good chapter, I laughed a lot which is pretty awesome either way. You did great, now I can't wait to see what'll happen next.

You shameless plug! :) That first paragraph was funny and Riolu standing up for Gale was a nice touch. Feel sorry for him getting knocked out though. Update as soon as you can

For a moment, I thought you were a goner. But it's a good thing you aren't. And this was an excellent way to return with a good humorous chapter.

Please continue.

Kiba! You updated like the good friend you are. Gale and co finished one challenge, time for the next. Update.

Wow, this story really does live. Great job, once again your humor is priceless. I wonder what the other three heroes lack and how they can overcome these obstacles to reach Norik? Cool chapter, update soon!

Shame on you for advertising! Anyway very nice chapter. Love the comedy, and liked the actio and the Test of Courage. What test will our crew face next? Upadte, Kiba, I'm really like this.

So Riolu passes. Good for him. I wonder what the next tests are. Good chapter, and nice banter between Gale and Zed. I await the next chapter.

Oh, and you might want to watch that author's part in the middle of the chapter. Things like that are what caused the first version of my tournament story to be deleted. Just a warning, though.