It'll be bad if Gale doesn't save Aleena. But then again, I think he can do it.

Please continue.

Nice Chapter Kiba! Okay this kinda reminds me about something from the Pirates of the Carribean movies, but this I have to say is pretty good. I like Vanilla's remark about losing more teeth... poor Gale. And Zed's reaction to Gale's taunts was priceless! As usual you did a great job and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Ahh, this definitely turning out to be a good story! Update as soon as you can!

Dang, can't believe I didn't read this! Well, it was a great chapter, and I hope Gale doesn't get slapped anymore or he'll be sipping his food through a straw...

Dude, this chapter was awesome. The swordfiht was pretty fast paced yet understandable, and was a great way to introduce us to this whole curse thing and the objective of the Black Mist Crew. I hope Gale and can reach Allena before the bloodthirsty Black Mist tears her to shreds and reverses the curse. Update soon!

Also, I realized that you tend to not name your chapters, which I find odd. Maybe you should do that on the side when selecting chapters in addition to at the beginning.

Let my people down at the forum know that I will be returning tomorrow, but probably not coming back onto the forum until Sunday. I'm pretty beat from my vacation, after all.

And this is why I take ninjas over pirates...wait I hate them both! Gale, I'll make an exception...for now. Um...pretty confused as I was kinda not paying attention (playing the WET demo) but whatever. Update soon.

Good chapter update as soon as you can :)

:O! That is just so awesome! Please update! ^_^ Gale and Zed... out of the two of them, I think Zed is my favorite. Character-wise, sternness I can deal with... pervertedness? Nope. -.- I like Gale's "guts" as they're called, but other than that... nope, definitely not. XD

Heh. Nothing special about this chapter other than the fact that Aleena was able to hold her own in battle. She's lucky she didn't die. Good luck to Gale and the others. I await the next chapter.

Shove off, men! It's time for adventure!!

Gale: I'm taking a nap. *Grabs a pillow and walks into the cabin*

*Sweatdrops*

PS, after you finish your first reunion chapter, I'll fill you in on the next chapter.

Update soon.

Even more POTC vibes! Glad to see you've started this again. I wonder what'll happen now. Update soon

Amazing story, Kiba Sniper. I'm a fan of Babylon Sky Hawk, and I'm glad to see the origins of Sonci's father revealed. I wonder if Jack Sparrow in this. Just have to wait and see. But please update soon. We're all waiting and I'm a bit impatient.

Very Good Chapters. So far I can see where Sonic got his attitude from! Full of Action and Comedy, especially Gales shenanigans. I'll keep a eye on this. Good Job and Update Soon!

Good to see this updated again. I'm already in love with this series. Gale is awesome!

Please continue! 8D

That was a very impressive show, but I had expected Gale to confuse Vanilla with his extended vocabulary to the point where she had no idea what he was talking about. That's usually what he does. But this is ok.

I'll wait until your next Bee chapter before sending you the next info.

Update.