That was great. You should definitely make it a three shot!

Nice job

i liked it! i hope you make it a three shot!

They are so cute together! Make it a three-shot!-Angel

I 3 it!..You should totally make it a three-shot...Or maybe even a full story?

I love it! Please make it a 3 shot!

I think that you should keep writing the story. They would be such a cute couple.

i realy like it. u can so tell they have deep feelings for each other...i cant wait to see if they do share those feelsing soon. great job very nice work. looking forward to more.

you should just make it a full story haha especially if your ending Im Still Me.)

Awesome update! I think the story should stay where it is-it was a great ending.

I think you should make this a three-shot, I'd like to know who the mysterious ex is. Or even the brother. Plus there's clearly some chemistry going on between Jelena and Randy. Nice chapter :D

i liked what u did...i was wondering were you ever going to make this a longer version..i think you would get really good responces to it...anyway nice work.

like it a lot)

Great first chapter. Can't wait for the update!

Aww yay, Randy to the rescue. I had visions of who her brother was, as well as her Boyfriend(? Or something). That made him seem so sweet, I think we're all happy to have friends like that. Especially if that friend wants more. Jelena is a pretty name, reminds me of tennis.